Bedazzled is this week concept for Jingle Poetry Potluck.They have given me NIGHT, MOON and STARS as the theme to write a poem for their Potluck.Let me check. I have a few strategies .Yes ,They are
1.Look, they are females
2.Keep it short
With the above two I wrote a poem that ends in rhyming and here it is for you
Poetry Potluck -Bedazzled
She comes as the powerful yet elegant
bringing in light to the world in abundant
She has in her the heat that warms everybody
being the centre, lots of planets in her she embody
Our Sun ,the queen of universe is alluring
with her presence she is the most welcomed in the morning
Coming slowly at night, she is cool and pleasant
she paves way for everyone ready to dormant
Bringing in her light like a torch in the dark
with tiny twinkling soldiers ,the Stars helping with her work
For mid-night travellers they are really a boon
our beautiful queen of night, She is the Moon
The Sun, the Moon, the stars are three concepts of puzzle
With their looks and their ways, they have the power to make you Bedazzled
Done for Jingle Poetry Potluck
Hi Uma, how are you? So many posts in a week...way to go :) This poem is very sweet. Take care :)ReplyDelete
Yeah,I am fine.Hope you are doing fineReplyDelete
I just got to know the communities and writing for them :).
Got excited!Let me see..may be I will slow down a bit in coming days...
the moon... a thousand wonderings since time immemorial and still inspires poem and song... beautifulReplyDelete
Perfection penned for Potluck. Thanks so very much, loved your eloquent wordplay! xxReplyDelete
This is very elegantReplyDelete
Thanks for sharing!
lovely accord to father sunReplyDelete
great...well written and interesting...:)ReplyDelete
It is Monday, I sincerely invite you to join us for a Monday Poetry Potluck party, bring in 1 to 3 poem treats to share, and have fun tasting other poets treats.
You will have 60 hours enjoying the fun.
Hurry up, the more you share, the happier we are.
Hope to see you in our party, hurry up, the earlier you are in, the more traffic you get...
to link in, click on the link via this comment, then look at the blue link button at the end of the post, click on the button, have your poem link copy and pasted in the first box, then enter your name, at last your email address...let us know if you need help by leaving a comment under the same post...