Life is full of pitfalls and thorns
Halfway through we find ourselves torn
The holes deeper
The thorns bulging thicker
Face it !
Believe to face it
Live it !
Hope to live through it
Each lesson you learn on the way
Moulds you to an archetype one day
Proud and Precious
Standing long
Head up and Strong
-For picture prompt from Magpie
Lovely..
ReplyDeleteI am still learning to be strong.. :)
stay strong,
ReplyDeleteget along...
hope that your life is a beautiful song..
Thanks for the inspirations.
Thanks all!When I saw this prompt,I saw the big holes and bulging stone..and still its a beautiful work of art.All I did was,I compared it with Life and this poem was born.
ReplyDeleteWhat perfect timing. I was having a difficult morning, and then I read this. Wonderfully inspirational!
ReplyDeleteI'm a great believer in learning by experience... learning by doing. You said it all in your poem. :)
ReplyDeleteVery nice...really enjoyed the read...bkm
ReplyDeleteAnd I'm so glad the birth was successful.
ReplyDeleteOh....nice!!! Very positive and full of some amazing grit! I like it !!
ReplyDeleteIt's a beautiful poem Uma for the Magpie.
ReplyDeleteKeep at it.
Happy New Year
Shail
Beauty, strength, determination explored in simple tender phrases. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI agree! Very nicely interpreted from the prompt.
ReplyDeleteInspiring piece!
ReplyDeleteEncouraging things to come. The music startled me. Then i enjoyed it.
ReplyDelete'Face it...Live it' good advice!
ReplyDeleteI appreciate the optimism of your words! :)
ReplyDeleteGood breath-drawing reminder work. :)
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