Walking alone in the path
Covered in richness of snow
Feeling so cold , I carried myself slow
Pondering upon my still life
The past and the present days
Something which I can never alter
The future still holds a place there after
With that vision of a hope
A hope to achieve my lost dreams
Like the snow my heart is ready to melt thee
With the slight hug of sun shine on me
I walk past the snow covered road
Crawling myself home feeling cold
There, I found myself surrounded by warm hearts
Giving me a new hope of tomorrow
A road for me to move on ..a clasp on my fingers- my kids
-submitted for Magpie picture prompt
a new hope of tomorrow- well done!
ReplyDeleteI thought it was THIS way?
ReplyDelete@Kathew -Thank you
ReplyDelete@Eric - A road to your blog ...well well ,I see
(I tried to make it point back here!)
ReplyDeleteingenious and inspiring.
ReplyDeleteAnother inspiring poem and just what I needed today. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI like this, a lot.
ReplyDelete-- K
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
@Eric-point taken
ReplyDelete@andreas,kay-thank you
@kristen-welcome
Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThe future still holds a place there after - indeed!
ReplyDeleteClever use of colour for your arrow :)
This was beautiful - and what a clever way of including the arrow in your work!
ReplyDeleteIndeed , what else? isn't life so very beautiful..
ReplyDeletevery beautiful uma. you captured the sadness and hope perfectly.
ReplyDeletetrisha
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Beautiful! Love the new hope on the horizon, hidden beneath the snow covered path, shadowed by the branches of love.
ReplyDeleteAh, very nicely done - inspirational and well layered.
ReplyDeleteReally liked it, especially the last line.
ReplyDelete"The slight hug of sunshine" and the final line---my favorites.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem. I like the 'still life' and the last line is touching, as others have also said.
ReplyDeleteWonderful words written with such depth and awesome thoughts.
ReplyDeletezeroing into the arrow
Very creative. I've never seen this before.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful poem of hope...i love it! :-)
ReplyDeleteAww...how absolutely moving and inspiring, Uma!! Family can be the ULTIMATE source of joy and hope indeed!!
ReplyDeleteLoved your magpie response!
beautiful...
ReplyDeletelove your creativity.
Cheers.