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Tuesday, 25 January 2011

Road To The Future


Walking alone in the path
Covered in richness of  snow
Feeling so cold , I carried myself slow
Pondering upon  my still life
The past and the present days
Something which I can never alter
The future still holds a place there after
With that vision of a  hope
A hope to achieve my lost dreams
Like the snow my heart is ready to melt thee
With the slight hug of sun shine on me
I walk past the snow covered road
Crawling myself  home feeling cold
There, I found myself surrounded by warm hearts
Giving me a new hope of tomorrow
A road for me to move on ..a clasp on my fingers- my kids

-submitted for Magpie picture prompt

23 comments:

  1. a new hope of tomorrow- well done!

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  2. @Kathew -Thank you
    @Eric - A road to your blog ...well well ,I see

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  3. (I tried to make it point back here!)

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  4. Another inspiring poem and just what I needed today. Thank you.

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  5. I like this, a lot.
    -- K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  6. @Eric-point taken
    @andreas,kay-thank you
    @kristen-welcome

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  7. The future still holds a place there after - indeed!


    Clever use of colour for your arrow :)

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  8. This was beautiful - and what a clever way of including the arrow in your work!

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  9. Indeed , what else? isn't life so very beautiful..

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  10. very beautiful uma. you captured the sadness and hope perfectly.

    trisha
    mydomainpvt.wordpress.com

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  11. Beautiful! Love the new hope on the horizon, hidden beneath the snow covered path, shadowed by the branches of love.

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  12. Ah, very nicely done - inspirational and well layered.

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  13. Really liked it, especially the last line.

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  14. "The slight hug of sunshine" and the final line---my favorites.

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  15. Lovely poem. I like the 'still life' and the last line is touching, as others have also said.

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  16. Wonderful words written with such depth and awesome thoughts.

    zeroing into the arrow

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  17. Very creative. I've never seen this before.

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  18. A beautiful poem of hope...i love it! :-)

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  19. Aww...how absolutely moving and inspiring, Uma!! Family can be the ULTIMATE source of joy and hope indeed!!

    Loved your magpie response!

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