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The Rain -The Shelter
REALITY OF THE RAIN :
Back to Home
I was walking back from school
Enjoying the weather moist and cool
I was covered fully from head to toe
Holding my little one and walking slow
Yelp! she cried ,"Mommy,its raining"
Though it was a harmless rain falling
To prevent ourselves from any disaster
We had to run fast for our Shelter
SPIRITUALITY OF THE RAIN
Back Outside -(Click for larger image)
Back to Home
I was walking back from school
Enjoying the weather moist and cool
I was covered fully from head to toe
Holding my little one and walking slow
Yelp! she cried ,"Mommy,its raining"
Though it was a harmless rain falling
To prevent ourselves from any disaster
We had to run fast for our Shelter
SPIRITUALITY OF THE RAIN
Back Outside -(Click for larger image)
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30 Responses to “The Rain -The Shelter”
Wednesday, January 12, 2011
Uma, both pieces are delightful.
Rain has such a cleansing effect.
Pamela
Wednesday, January 12, 2011
Love the flow of this and the description of the rain.
Wednesday, January 12, 2011
Cool concept to combine home and outside and use the image. Enjoyed, especially the second stanza on the image.
Wednesday, January 12, 2011
Dear Uma,
Good Morning!
What a splash,dear!
Beautiful picture and lovely words!
I love pitter patter raindrops
Falling through the leaves
And on my tiled roof...
Wishing you a wonderful day ahead,
Sasneham,
Anu
Wednesday, January 12, 2011
interesting use of the prompt words and I like what you've done with them.
Thursday, January 13, 2011
Very nice site, actually is my pleasure add it on my favorite ones. Great job, dear friend. Carlos from Brazil was here.
Thursday, January 13, 2011
@ all-lovely that you enjoyed reading my poems and thanks for the comments
@self-taught -I am happy to be a part of your blog that is created for a cause.Thanks for your visit!
Thursday, January 13, 2011
Gentle.
Thursday, January 13, 2011
yeah, keep running and find your shelter.
lovely rain poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Thursday, January 13, 2011
Your words and music match the beauty of rain.
Thursday, January 13, 2011
loved the different takes on rain...
Nothing can beat the feel of first rain...
beautiful writes
Thursday, January 13, 2011
lovely.. thank you for sharing. congrats on your perfect poet award wk 36.. here’s mine for this thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/19/the-tears/
Thursday, January 13, 2011
Loved both pieces. Nice depth within the verses of the latter piece. Well done/.
Friday, January 14, 2011
A litany for rain. Beautiful.
Friday, January 14, 2011
Aahh... loved the soothing nature of these poems...
Very recently, I experienced similar sensations flooding my mind while I was walking as it was snowing.. it was simply amazing... the little flakes landing on me, and melting to my warmth.. a very lovely feeling indeed! And that's when I got all nostalgic about the Mumbai rains.. :)
Friday, January 14, 2011
aawwww...that was sooo sweettt :D
lovely poem :D
here from Jingle's Rally.. You can find my poem at
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2011/01/12/i-dance/
Friday, January 14, 2011
Such a beautiful representation of rain. I like the spiritual connection.
Friday, January 14, 2011
A melody of rain ... lovely poem:)
Friday, January 14, 2011
What a beautiful medley of rain poems! Thanks for sharing. :)
Saturday, January 15, 2011
enjoyed reading the compilation of styles...very nice. Thank you for sharing.
Wednesday, January 19, 2011
Spell binding.. both the pieces are enchanting..
I love rains besides enjoying winters- but not so much the puddles.. :(
Love xxx
Thursday, January 20, 2011
beautiful rainy poems..
loved them...
:)
Tuesday, January 25, 2011
Good flow, word choices.
Tuesday, January 25, 2011
Happy Tuesday.
Monday, April 04, 2011
Very nice page, loved your creative work!
Short Poems
Monday, April 04, 2011
Cold rain evokes feelings of security in the sheltered. Yes, I found meaning in all these delightful little poems, even the image of running to protect you and your infant from 'imagined' disasters!
Monday, April 04, 2011
Both of these are very nice - it's always funny how our first response is to get out of the rain and yet we shower and swim. hmmm. Like your style.
Tuesday, April 05, 2011
These are quiet lovely; though the second one stole my heart!
Tuesday, April 05, 2011
I enjoyed both of these. Very nice, Honey.
Sunday, July 24, 2011
Both beautiful.
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