Making you fall in love outdoor as well as indoor
Pushing you down with love bruises
Just to wet your skin with soft kisses
Making your head lift high to a day dreamer
With hot blood rushing here and there higher
Pulling you up to hug tight in his arms
Singing you lullaby till you sleep calm
I tried my hand at BALLAD with a touch of sadness but in love.
He drives me down with love bruises
Sweeps my feet off the floor
To wet my skin with soft kisses
Both outdoor and indoor
Hot blood rushing in sends alarm
Making me cry with joy
Pulls me to hug tight in his arms
I day dream, Oh! My boy
My husband will come back to home
Away from the sound of war
Every six months I dream like this
The wait has been that far
He did come,but with broken arms
That has been lost in war
But now ,he is always with me
He is still my life's star
With work benefits paying our life
Missed days , compensated
Making love with my valentine
Life for us is gifted
Touched 100 th post and still going on......
Congrats Uma, you rock.. 100 posts within a short span is awesome.. Great.. And Blog On!
ReplyDeleteWonderful poems here, loved it..
Someone is Special
@sis
ReplyDeleteThanks and welcome first to my 100 th post.It may be a short span of blogging but for poetry it has been there for long...my journey hasn't finished yet though :)
100th post, wow.
ReplyDeleteyou rock.
love the heart shape.
Thats a really cool post, especially cool being the 100th. I'll be back again, really like your style.
ReplyDeletesmiles...i love you heart poem...somewhere...some day...big smiles.
ReplyDeleteDear Uma
ReplyDeleteIts so beautiful and I am starting to enjoy your concrete poetries.. you work so beautifully around the structure with your beautiful words...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/02/whispers-another-kind-of-valentines-day.html
100? Awesome!!! I loved your shape/concrete heart poem very much. Your ballad was poignant but lovely.
ReplyDelete!00 posts, cool! I love the shape poem.
ReplyDeleteNice work on the ballad.
Pamela
Oh crap! Is it Valentine's Day already?
ReplyDelete(Bolts out the door to buy flowers)
I love ballads, one of the earliest forms I attempted. I think I grew from there on. I do miss the envoy which would have been even sweeter on this one. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteThe shape poem is really sweet, Uma...
ReplyDeleteThe ballad is simply beautiful!! Sad, but beautiful nonetheless!! Love, when true, is absolutely unconditional... and you've said that so well here...
Heartiest Congratulations on your 100th, my friend!! I am looking forward to reading many mannnnnnny more from you....
Beautiful posts!
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I dig this, the top 2...awesome! :)
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true and sweet like dew.
ReplyDeletelove the creativity and sentiments on this.
Happy V Day.
A++
That last poem was really moving. Loved it.
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Uma,
ReplyDeleteI loved your Valentine's heartfelt and shaped words.
Beautiful sentiments in all your words.
Best wishes, Eileen
Nice to come back to this beautifully presented verse again through Jingle Poetry Potluck...
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-emptiness-and-soul.html
All three are beautiful. The heart poem made me smile both for shape as well as words. I loved the line "Pushing you down with love bruises" in 'To that someone special'. And your ballad definitely touched of both sadness and love; very sweet and lovely.
ReplyDeleteHow very beautiful !
ReplyDeletePlease have a good new week.
daily athens
a beautiful ballad filled with arms big enough to hold the weight... some days it is just so good to see his face everything else is forgotten...
ReplyDeletewonderful words to commemorate your one hundredth post your Ballad is simply beautiful.
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