Todays Prompt :TANKA
- It is a Japanese poem of five lines.
- The first and the third lines composes of five syllables and the other lines has seven syllable.(Syllable is the count of how we pronounce a word.For example, poem is po -em counting to 2 syllable and wonderful is won-der-ful counting to 3 syllable)
- Tanka is in the form of 1-2-3-4-5 lines with 5-7-5-7-7 syllable.
Imaginary
the characters speaks volumes
of the funny side
played by the human in real
depicting a serious note
Ubiquitous sci-fi
physical work of human
diminish further
humans imaginations
gains life with perspiration
The sixth sense of mind
super power predictor
unravels mystery
of the future it beholds
value to win mind over fate
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Nice tanka! And it fits the Potluck theme too! I've always found these difficult but will try. I like a challenge!
ReplyDeleteLove these efforts. Good form.
ReplyDeleteAnother insightful piece... :) I love the first and last best... :)
ReplyDeleteHere are mine, dear.. I have two.. Cartoon of Me and Sci-fi..
http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/02/collections-of-tings-poetry-tpf110.html (Cartoon of Me)
http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/02/collections-of-tings-poetry-tpf111-sci.html (Sci-fi)
See you around!!! :)
oh i have no tanka to post unless i really sit down and count my old ones haha! anyway, you wrote a nice one.. here's my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/11/29/cinderella-for-a-man/
ReplyDeletevivid demonstrations.
ReplyDeletelove your cute take.
A++
Perfect contribution to Potluck, great!
ReplyDeleteoooh, that was intense Uma!
ReplyDeleteNice take.. :)
Love xox
http://oliviasmindlymatters.wordpress.com/2011/02/28/virtuality/
It snowed last week.
ReplyDeleteI had trouble driving home.
Chunks of ice got stuck
in between my wiper blades.
I thought of pulling over.
Great start. Like them very much.
ReplyDelete@all Thanks friends..you make me write more :)
ReplyDeleteI love the Sixth Sense tanka! Beautiful description. :)
ReplyDeleteWell done. Descriptive and right on target with Potluck theme. Thank you! Most enjoyable.
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Thanks!
Happy Potluck.
Interesting read......I havent tried this form. Well done!
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