The Avatar :
It is an embodiment to give a concrete or visible form to someone or something. I tried my hand in combination of Loop poetry and Haiku's. I chose the theme "Avatar" ( "Avadaram" in Tamil ) .
Spirituality
Freedom of the Physical Self
An Avatar is born
An Avatar is born
With bad memories washed away
He Chose to do good
He Chose to do good
For what he is born today
Called this change "Avatar"
Starkly powerful. Interesting form.
ReplyDeletelove your imagination.
ReplyDeletebrilliant one.
A great tribute to the movie..
ReplyDeleteAll three haikus are excellent :)
Great! I am encourage to give birth to Avatar! :)
ReplyDeleteThat works really well!
ReplyDeleteLike the spacing on the last line.
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This is great. I like how you wove the haiku with the repeated lines, Uma.
ReplyDeleteHe chose to do good! Wish more people could make this transformation!
ReplyDeleteHe passed on through the river of forgetfullness and chose to do good. Avatar or Avalokitesvara? I didn't see the movie.
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