Grows the binding strength of pooja and slogan for years
On the temple build with bricks and stones
With those abrasions carved into beautiful sculptures
With a handful of flowers ready to shower
The lord welcomes us in the bright sacred flame
Grows the binding strength of pooja and slogan for years
The beauty of arts is seen everywhere
The dancing goddess on the pillars makes us stare
With those abrasions carved into beautiful sculptures
The loss of weight in heart, bygone the fears
We surrender our prayers and the whole self to him
Grows the binding strength of pooja and slogan for years
The temple is the only place we bury our tears
To the good spirits and wandering saints that lives there
With those abrasions carved into beautiful sculptures
Our Temple of heart is build by meditating clear
Picking each positive stones we get and smear
With those abrasions carved into beautiful sculptures
Grows the binding strength of pooja and slogan for years
Lovely Villanelle uma ,liked the spirit that goes with it.Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteSheilagh Lee said:beautiful and very uplifting
ReplyDeleteWell worded...nice feeling
ReplyDeleteLovely spiritual thoughts.
ReplyDeleteNice post, is the music at the bottom of your page George Winston?
ReplyDeleteCheers, Sausage..
I like this one a lot. Left me feeling content....
ReplyDelete@all thanks.Feels happy that you felt content and uplifting.
ReplyDelete@sausage-The music is river flows in you by yiruma
witty tale.
ReplyDeleteThe temple is a place to bury pains and share joys.
loved your take.
Cheers.
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Beautiful poem to describe a magnificent temple.........so beautiful and so intricately carved. Thanks for this, it is uplifting.
ReplyDeleteA lovely way to describe the temple which means so much to you. The repetition of certain lines is very appealing.
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You paint a beautiful place of peace. Marvelous poem.
ReplyDeleteMoving and a prayer in itself...and the picture is magnificient..can't remember which temple though...maybe one i have visited before...
ReplyDeleteonly place to bury our tears is dantastic- i enjoy reading this uma.. my potluck's here: http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/04/metamorphosis/
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