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Mirror My Haiku
Who does know better
Paradise of my thoughts , I
Write to appease self
Stainless Glass, Mirrors
My reflections yet I shy
To part inner stains
The Heights of Haiku Challenge - September 2011 hosted by Haiku Heights Leo with today's' Prompt : Write , Mirror ( Have to put two posts in a row having stumbled upon only today )
Review of writing an Haiku
More Haiku 's ....
Paradise of my thoughts , I
Write to appease self
Stainless Glass, Mirrors
My reflections yet I shy
To part inner stains
The Heights of Haiku Challenge - September 2011 hosted by Haiku Heights Leo with today's' Prompt : Write , Mirror ( Have to put two posts in a row having stumbled upon only today )
Review of writing an Haiku
More Haiku 's ....
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9 Responses to “Mirror My Haiku”
Friday, September 02, 2011
Self satisfaction is most important I think, Uma :) well said.
Friday, September 02, 2011
To know a poet
is like knowing yourself
so close but far yet
Friday, September 02, 2011
I agree. The days I don't write, "self" isn't happy!
Friday, September 02, 2011
I think its OK.. stains are private.. and if one can see them for oneself even then it's courageous..
Friday, September 02, 2011
but we all have stains, those of us that realize that are better off for it! awesome writing!
Monday, September 05, 2011
nice..poem...""inner part stains""
such a truthful effective line...
do check my poem blog
http://chitraskavana.blogspot.com
Monday, September 05, 2011
'we all have stains inside..."wonderfull poem
Monday, September 12, 2011
Such an honest pair of verses. We do write to appease self, at least in part. Regardless of other motives, writing satisfies something in us; otherwise we wouldn't do it.
As to the second verse, it's so true that we all have inner stains we don't want to face and sometimes don't want to let go of or part from, even though we know we should.
Monday, December 05, 2011
very nice
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