Paradise of my thoughts , I
Write to appease self
Stainless Glass, Mirrors
My reflections yet I shy
To part inner stains
The Heights of Haiku Challenge - September 2011 hosted by Haiku Heights Leo with today's' Prompt : Write , Mirror ( Have to put two posts in a row having stumbled upon only today )
Review of writing an Haiku
More Haiku 's ....
You are invited to read and comment on this post : Online Boons and An Indiblogger's Story .Awaiting whats in store for me today :)
Self satisfaction is most important I think, Uma :) well said.ReplyDelete
To know a poetReplyDelete
is like knowing yourself
so close but far yet
I agree. The days I don't write, "self" isn't happy!ReplyDelete
I think its OK.. stains are private.. and if one can see them for oneself even then it's courageous..ReplyDelete
but we all have stains, those of us that realize that are better off for it! awesome writing!ReplyDelete
nice..poem...""inner part stains""ReplyDelete
such a truthful effective line...
do check my poem blog
'we all have stains inside..."wonderfull poemReplyDelete
Such an honest pair of verses. We do write to appease self, at least in part. Regardless of other motives, writing satisfies something in us; otherwise we wouldn't do it.ReplyDelete
As to the second verse, it's so true that we all have inner stains we don't want to face and sometimes don't want to let go of or part from, even though we know we should.