R H Y T H M U S : Haiku

Thursday, 22 September 2011

Shape modifier
Adjusts itself and rests in peace
Rational Water

Water everywhere
Yet ,unsuitable to drink
Contamination

Ramesh SoodThursday, September 22, 2011
Truth stated so simply.. well done Uma..
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Susie ClevengerThursday, September 22, 2011
I see water's tranquility in the first and how man has destroyed a necessity of life in the second. Great job!
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SarasThursday, September 22, 2011
Yes, Water is great leveler!
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Rachana ShakyawarFriday, September 23, 2011
SO much agree with you!! And so well crafted the Haiku, propagating to save water and reminding us the weird situation we all are in stuck today!!!
Great thoughts!!
Liked it!

~Keep the Spark ALive..
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Kodjo DeynooFriday, September 23, 2011
In tomorrows world water would be what we fight over, in today's world water is what we fightover
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Maude LynnFriday, September 23, 2011
That first one is so cool!
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Magical Mystical TeacherFriday, September 23, 2011
And the second one is so sobering...

My Watery Haiku
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