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Thursday, 6 January 2011

ABC of Better Thoughts

GOLDEN FISH - GOLDEN WORDS


Any swords or knife that tears
Bears no lasting wounds forever
Clingy sarcastic words and sayings creates
Deeper wounds that heal never

Eternal fake smile and tainted hearts
Finds no plausible  contentment in life
Greater than a calmed soul which reaches
Higher contentment slowly ...so
Inculcate a willingness to Love

Jack of all arts and
King of none makes
Little Tom to act like a
Monkey on a Banyan Tree

Never estimate the talent
Of others because each one exhibits
Performance in their own unique way
Quails are better singers
Rather than peacock who is still unique in its beauty

Search and embark to learn forever - our Life is
Teaching us new things in this stay on our
Unique earth that is a part of the big universe

Vacuum the dirts that lingers in our heart
Warm it up with positive hopes and thoughts
X-ray each deeds you do and say
Yearn to fill the emptiness
Zeal will fill you and be with you always

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43 comments:

  1. that is beautifully done :D
    loved the form ... well expressed

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  2. Hey! You did the ABC thing too! Cool!

    (That "X" is a pain in the butt, ain't it?)

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  3. Thanks friends :)
    @Eric - yes but with 'thesaurus' things seemed to be a bit simpler ;)

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  4. How clever of you to use the Abecedarian form! Brava! Your 'examples' do indeed fill the emptiness. ☼

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  5. What an effort and imagination and creativity and I am happy to have read it.. wow!!

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  6. Quite an interesting form, depth, creativity, sensing deeper meanings, deeper yearnings for the flow.

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  7. @all Thanks to drop by and post your valuable comment

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  8. yeah, you got the goodness award...
    keep it up.
    ;)

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  9. loved the depth of meaning in this.

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  10. "Eternal fake smile and tainted hearts
    Finds no plausible contentment in life
    Greater than a calmed soul which reaches
    Higher contentment slowly ...so
    Inculcate a willingness to Love"...

    This is awesome..love your work :)

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  11. This is very well done. I love the use of the ABCs. And congratulations on the publishing of your poetry book.

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  12. N-ever estimate the talent
    O-f others...

    NO to underestimation! Terrific poem! :)

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  13. very talented acrostics.
    well done.

    A++

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  14. well done- cleverly and thoughtfully worded

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  15. A creative take on alphabets! Well written :)
    Love xox

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  16. Wonderful, and you've inspired me to use the alphabet to create something.

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  17. this was quite an exercise, nicely pulled together.

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  18. From A to Z the poem appealed to me. Well written!

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  19. great uma! thank you for sharing this! my late potluck haha- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/03/08/nectar-from-heaven/

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  20. An acrostic with such an awesome message!! Superbly written, Uma! I LOVED JKLM :)

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  21. really loved it, the acrostic with the ABC, wonderful..

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  22. now that's just darn creative and cunning - great write!

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  23. Very well done. These are wonderful thoughts.

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  24. So unique! And with a nice message.

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  25. What a wonderful way to ABC your through a difficult word.

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  26. what a fantastic acrostic just loved every bit of it!

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  27. You have all the letters of the alphabet here. Quite a feat. My favorite line is "Warm it up with positive hopes and thoughts." Inspiring words here.

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  28. Nice flow of words and thoughts.
    Beautiful.Loved it.

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  29. Very ambitious undertaking! Loved the image of a calmed soul reaching contentment slowly.

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  30. what creative and smart a-z piece.
    Thanks for sharing.

    :)

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  31. Very innovative and convincing at the same time.

    Though I shall ask you to reconsider Line 4 of Stanza 1. Shouldn't there be 'heal' instead of 'heals', considering you have used 'wounds' before?

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  32. @all Thanks for your attention :)
    @mihirvatsa ..will consider

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  33. Wonderful words.. and very true! :)

    Here's my entry this week: http://wp.me/p1hI0l-7w

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  34. Extraordinary creative format! The colored words also add a whole level of intricacy. I very much enjoyed.

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  35. Wow! What a creative way to present such profound expressions. I really enjoyed it from A to Zed! Blessings!

    http://kaysalady.wordpress.com/2011/08/30/my-mind-is-frozen/

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  36. vacuum the dirt that lingers in our hearts - I like that.

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