Sunday, 25 September 2011

Haiku - Phoenix

Darkness, left alone
woman in black prayed
to embrace phoenix

Invisible light
that shone over the darkness
had raced from her  heart

She , a strong woman 
allowed herself to embrace
into divine light By: Umamaheswari Anandane

15 comments:

  1. Love the strength portrayed here...

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  2. love the thought of embracing into divine light

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  3. i have enjoyed reading the posts from this week's magpie... it is good to read of a strong woman in the divine light overcoming darkness..

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  4. I really like that ending, dear. :-)

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  5. Beautiful! Love love love the ending!

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  6. You've said so much, in so few words. Well done.

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  7. Vary beautifully thought out.. a powerful haiku..like phoenix..

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  8. nice...particularly like the last stanza...

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  9. Phew, love the bit about divine light!

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  10. Wonderful take on the HH prompt and the photo. Uplifting and encouraging verses here.

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  11. Hadn't noticed there was divine light in this image to write about till I read this. Thanks :-D

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