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Saturday, 19 March 2011

Inside My Poem Book :Command Haiku



Every Life Commands
A Reinforcement to stand strong
Self-Motivation!


The look in your Eyes
Commands my Attention 
A Love Messenger !



13 comments:

  1. Yes, yes... Self-motivation.. Indeed, the reinforcement to stand strong.. and hmm, that messenger... LOL, it just turned my smile on..

    Oh yes, Uma, I wrote something, dedicated specially for you.. http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/03/tings-mood-touch-tmt07-1st-light-thank.html

    Thank you so much and I owe you a hug in reality.. :) so for now, here, *HUG* (a cyber one)... :)

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  2. Wise and well written, Uma. :-)
    Happy Potuck days ...

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  3. "A love messenger', what a great line. Both haiku are so lovely.

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  4. Oh yes we do need that reinforcement in concrete to strengthen our belief and gosh did cupid pay a visit.... :D

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  5. @krislen -Thanks Krislen.I feel honored.You know what,other than self-motivation (the foundation),supporting each other makes us work (writing/any other work) more to grow into a strongstrong building.

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  6. @jidhu,teric,jamie,nanka-yes,that binding force is what we all need..maybe thats the only force that needed to be developed to grow strong ;)..thanks for viiting.

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  7. different but equally impressive :)

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  8. lovely haikus. wonderful take on the prompt

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  9. Love to see a positive message in poetry Haiku is the perfect format for it, yours is wonderful!

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  10. Uma commands the cupid I see :) nice playful haikus.. thank u for the inspiration this week :)

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  11. @raj,jingle,amanda
    That was so lovely of you

    @vinay -hmm...so u have seen me commanding the cupid.Well!let me tell you a secret soon

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