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So many facets and angles... like our magnificent minds!
Loved it!I really like how we all take different paths for the same picture!viscous time
A multidimensional way of seeing things. a cool piece. I like! :) JH
lovely shape, what a fine tale.
Beautiful shape poem! Lovely message. :)
Flower... how nice to use it to express it in this write.. :)
BEAUTIFUL..AND IT BLOOMS..SO WELL..
A jaunty write! Well done.
Simply lovely, Uma!! And so very true.. if the love seed hits your pot, a plant is sure to grow... blooming with imagination and lovely thoughts.. Really enjoyed reading your poem.. and the shape was just BEAUTIFUL!! "The garlic teeth arranged ,its rawness attracted to your smile" -- loved this line the most!! It was soo visual...
Garlic teeth make a faintly disturbibg picture...
@all Thank you for dropping by@Kavitha - that have hit me already and here I am writing poems ;)@Trellissimo- teeth arranged similar to garlic pods ...dont imagine the size though ,that may make you faint really . hehe ;)
Very nice and your flower pot is a lovely reminder spring is about here...love the mystery...bkm
Oh how we connect the dots of love and longing.Just had to ask; is the 1st word 3rd line from the bottom If?
@signed..bmk - Spring!..yea that was so well said and related to..thanks@booguloo - True...and yes,it is"IF"....If it sits on your heart ,you will have to face the consequences of LOVE pain(sweet /terrible)
Terrific shape poem - many fine images!
"Love is a strong potion rarely invented"or has it to be reinvented every time? I have to read this again to see another light :)
I love your shape poem - and your words were so very fitting! Imagination definitely swirls...☼
I really liked your poem and it's shape.
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