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Shape of a Heart and Love poem for Valentine - My 100 th post
To all those near /dear ones:
To that someone special :
Someone special to sweep your feet off the floor
Making you fall in love outdoor as well as indoor
Pushing you down with love bruises
Just to wet your skin with soft kisses
Making your head lift high to a day dreamer
With hot blood rushing here and there higher
Pulling you up to hug tight in his arms
Singing you lullaby till you sleep calm
I tried my hand at BALLAD with a touch of sadness but in love.
He drives me down with love bruises
Sweeps my feet off the floor
To wet my skin with soft kisses
Both outdoor and indoor
Hot blood rushing in sends alarm
Making me cry with joy
Pulls me to hug tight in his arms
I day dream, Oh! My boy
My husband will come back to home
Away from the sound of war
Every six months I dream like this
The wait has been that far
He did come,but with broken arms
That has been lost in war
But now ,he is always with me
He is still my life's star
With work benefits paying our life
Missed days , compensated
Making love with my valentine
Life for us is gifted
Touched 100 th post and still going on......
Making you fall in love outdoor as well as indoor
Pushing you down with love bruises
Just to wet your skin with soft kisses
Making your head lift high to a day dreamer
With hot blood rushing here and there higher
Pulling you up to hug tight in his arms
Singing you lullaby till you sleep calm
I tried my hand at BALLAD with a touch of sadness but in love.
He drives me down with love bruises
Sweeps my feet off the floor
To wet my skin with soft kisses
Both outdoor and indoor
Hot blood rushing in sends alarm
Making me cry with joy
Pulls me to hug tight in his arms
I day dream, Oh! My boy
My husband will come back to home
Away from the sound of war
Every six months I dream like this
The wait has been that far
He did come,but with broken arms
That has been lost in war
But now ,he is always with me
He is still my life's star
With work benefits paying our life
Missed days , compensated
Making love with my valentine
Life for us is gifted
Touched 100 th post and still going on......
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21 Responses to “Shape of a Heart and Love poem for Valentine - My 100 th post”
Monday, February 07, 2011
Congrats Uma, you rock.. 100 posts within a short span is awesome.. Great.. And Blog On!
Wonderful poems here, loved it..
Someone is Special
Monday, February 07, 2011
@sis
Thanks and welcome first to my 100 th post.It may be a short span of blogging but for poetry it has been there for long...my journey hasn't finished yet though :)
Tuesday, February 08, 2011
100th post, wow.
you rock.
love the heart shape.
Tuesday, February 08, 2011
Thats a really cool post, especially cool being the 100th. I'll be back again, really like your style.
Tuesday, February 08, 2011
smiles...i love you heart poem...somewhere...some day...big smiles.
Wednesday, February 09, 2011
Dear Uma
Its so beautiful and I am starting to enjoy your concrete poetries.. you work so beautifully around the structure with your beautiful words...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/02/whispers-another-kind-of-valentines-day.html
Wednesday, February 09, 2011
100? Awesome!!! I loved your shape/concrete heart poem very much. Your ballad was poignant but lovely.
Wednesday, February 09, 2011
!00 posts, cool! I love the shape poem.
Nice work on the ballad.
Pamela
Wednesday, February 09, 2011
Oh crap! Is it Valentine's Day already?
(Bolts out the door to buy flowers)
Wednesday, February 09, 2011
I love ballads, one of the earliest forms I attempted. I think I grew from there on. I do miss the envoy which would have been even sweeter on this one. Nice work!
Thursday, February 10, 2011
The shape poem is really sweet, Uma...
The ballad is simply beautiful!! Sad, but beautiful nonetheless!! Love, when true, is absolutely unconditional... and you've said that so well here...
Heartiest Congratulations on your 100th, my friend!! I am looking forward to reading many mannnnnnny more from you....
Friday, February 11, 2011
Beautiful posts!
ransom
Monday, February 14, 2011
I dig this, the top 2...awesome! :)
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/
Monday, February 14, 2011
true and sweet like dew.
love the creativity and sentiments on this.
Happy V Day.
A++
Monday, February 14, 2011
That last poem was really moving. Loved it.
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/02/14/valentine-card/
Monday, February 14, 2011
Uma,
I loved your Valentine's heartfelt and shaped words.
Beautiful sentiments in all your words.
Best wishes, Eileen
Tuesday, February 15, 2011
Nice to come back to this beautifully presented verse again through Jingle Poetry Potluck...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-emptiness-and-soul.html
Tuesday, February 15, 2011
All three are beautiful. The heart poem made me smile both for shape as well as words. I loved the line "Pushing you down with love bruises" in 'To that someone special'. And your ballad definitely touched of both sadness and love; very sweet and lovely.
Sunday, March 13, 2011
How very beautiful !
Please have a good new week.
daily athens
Sunday, March 13, 2011
a beautiful ballad filled with arms big enough to hold the weight... some days it is just so good to see his face everything else is forgotten...
Sunday, March 13, 2011
wonderful words to commemorate your one hundredth post your Ballad is simply beautiful.
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