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Wednesday, 9 February 2011

The Avatar

The Avatar :
It is an embodiment  to give a concrete or visible form to someone or something. I tried my hand in combination of Loop poetry and Haiku's. I chose the theme "Avatar" ( "Avadaram" in Tamil ) .

Spirituality
Freedom of the Physical Self
An Avatar is born


An Avatar is born
With bad memories washed away
He Chose to do good


He Chose to do good
For what he is born today
Called this change "Avatar"



8 comments:

  1. Starkly powerful. Interesting form.

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  2. love your imagination.
    brilliant one.

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  3. A great tribute to the movie..
    All three haikus are excellent :)

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  4. Great! I am encourage to give birth to Avatar! :)

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  5. That works really well!
    Like the spacing on the last line.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/02/28/sci-fi-hi/

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  6. This is great. I like how you wove the haiku with the repeated lines, Uma.

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  7. He chose to do good! Wish more people could make this transformation!

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  8. He passed on through the river of forgetfullness and chose to do good. Avatar or Avalokitesvara? I didn't see the movie.

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