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Haiku(5-7-5) Theme Complaining
I have written three Haiku's separately below but they relate to one another.
A little bit of Complaining
Lets peep into a little bit of Haiku.Its one form of poetry that combines form ,content and language in a meaningful, yet compact form.Nature, Feelings and experiences are expressed mostly in Haiku poems.The common form of Haiku is just 3 lines.The first one will be written with 5 syllables,second one is written with 7 syllables and the last line with again 5 syllables.Overall being only 17 syllables.(A syllable is an elementary sound, or a combination of elementary sounds, uttered together like now -1 syllable,today-2 syllables).The Haiku must paint a mental image on the mind of the reader who reads the Haiku.
Haiku(5-7-5) Theme Complaining
I have written three Haiku's separately below but they relate to one another.
All is not well when
An Expectation Shatters
Started To Complain
Feelings unexpressed
Creating mental tension
Started To Complain
Before You Complain
Understand consequences
Let your feelings out
The above Haiku for Poets United Thursday Think Tank Prompt
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16 Responses to “A little bit of Complaining”
Friday, October 08, 2010
Very nice haiku's. I liked all of them... thanks for sharing...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Friday, October 08, 2010
Hello Uma.. yes, you have rightly told about haiku and written them so well.. Somehow.. I feel Haiku shoul show.. mind's eye should see then why should there be photo to make the mind make a biased choice..
Friday, October 08, 2010
@Ramesh..I agree but the picture was a prompt given by Poets United to write a Poem.And I chose to write few Haikus :)
Friday, October 08, 2010
Thanks for Ramesh for realing nailing the complaining theme.
I dig haiku - thanks Uma
Friday, October 08, 2010
beautiful complaint poem...
Friday, October 08, 2010
I was a great fan of Haiku when I was in the corporate world..eventually it reached a point of saturation for me.
You write really well. I am following you now.
cheers
Friday, October 08, 2010
true words,
lovely complaint poem.
u know better,
very aptly stated struggles and the consequence along with it.
Saturday, October 09, 2010
a cool way of complaining :)
Saturday, October 09, 2010
Wandering through the thick bushes of my mind searching...I explore here a place to Dwell On
I like this line very much. I dont know what;s haiku, but this poem sounds interesting.
Saturday, October 09, 2010
Very well said.. few short words- expressed a bigger aspect.. :D
Happy Rally
xox
Saturday, October 09, 2010
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/09/mountains-are-high/
take the awards after you are done,
for Poets Rally, 3 poems can be submitted....
also, vote your favorite poets after you finish your initial 18 commenting....
Thanks a lot!
have fun!
Saturday, October 09, 2010
Very well-expressed and you are all-rounded in different poetry writing.. Anyway, I have been following your blog for awhile hence I am here to extend my invitation to you..
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Sunday, October 10, 2010
It highlights the importance of communication!
Monday, October 11, 2010
Look before you leap and think before you complain.
Monday, October 11, 2010
@all Thanks for your valuable comments!
Tuesday, October 12, 2010
I think I never understand before complaining... thou I will try! Thank you!!
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