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Thursday, 14 October 2010

Rainfall & Heart Haiku's


I am happy to announce you all that I joined two more poetry blogs that prompts poets to write more.The first  one is for Three Word Wednesday(3WW) : Hiss, Absolve, Ridicule.I finally tried to write a poem with those three given words.The last poem is written for One single Impression's prompt "LONELY".
Again, A Haiku Word(5-7-5), you can see that I got in love with the Haiku. It says that he never leaves me ;)



Down hissed the rainfall
Washing dirt's that ridiculed
The greens were absolved




Make thy door's open
For thou' who has lonely hearts
So I may come in





Ha! A final touch ...
A Haiku itself is a Beauty, a picture added to it is A final touch :)
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15 comments:

  1. Abigail ParkerThursday, October 14, 2010

    A lovely pair of haiku! Very vivid images.

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  2. FrikoThursday, October 14, 2010

    I am another one who loves poems.
    We have therefore much in common.

    Thank you for visiting my blog.

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  3. TweetyThursday, October 14, 2010

    lovely haiku's...i am always so jealous of people who can write haiku's such beautifully and with such ease...simply great :) thought both are great i would say i am a little partial towards the second one...

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  4. Sathish Chandrasekaran (சதீஷ் சந்திரசேகரன்)Thursday, October 14, 2010

    Hey what is a haiku ?????

    btw the poem was really good :)

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  5. Uma AnandaneThursday, October 14, 2010

    @all Thanks for your comments!
    @sathish ...to know abt haiku do read my 'A little bit of complaining' poem

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  6. Thom GabrukiewiczThursday, October 14, 2010

    like them both, equally.

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  7. Emmanuel IbokFriday, October 15, 2010

    Both of them are wonderful and you did a great job following the prompt with precision...Nice one!

    TGIF, have a great weekend,
    Cheers!

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  8. Ramesh SoodFriday, October 15, 2010

    Very well done.. loved them both.. like twins.. can't be partial..

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  9. Umm MymoonahFriday, October 15, 2010

    Both the pictures looks amazing.

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  10. JingleFriday, October 15, 2010

    love your taste of images and words...
    breath taking Haikus!

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  11. AnonymousSaturday, October 16, 2010

    both are fabulous!

    trisha
    mydomainpvt.wordpress.com

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  12. new moonMonday, October 18, 2010

    both have a nice, soothing quality

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  13. eyeographyTuesday, October 19, 2010

    Loved both the haikus...
    The first one though is superb... :)

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  14. AnonymousTuesday, October 26, 2010

    lovely..

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  15. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallWednesday, October 27, 2010

    http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/27/the-celebrate-poet-of-september-award-nomination-announcement/

    how are you?
    please vote when you have a moment,

    you are nominated, automatically, u win 1 vote,
    when you vote for other poets, u win another vote for yourself,

    thanks for the attention.

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