Yes, the poetry luck has been opened today with the theme 'The Four elements of Nature'.While thinking about it, I got a doubt whether it is four elements in nature or five elements in nature including the sky(aagayam in Tamil).Well,I am going in for the four elements as that is what My poetry potluck requires me to write.You might have noticed that most of my poems relates itself with something real in life like human beings and their feelings.I am doing the same here.Yes,I am comparing the four elements with a WOMAN.She is always surrounded by them in different ways in her life.One of the way has been published as a poem for you.Have a Nice day!
WIND
I met the handsome
Playing around ,swaying my heart as he goes
Always cool and tender his touch
His reasons I have become
Life in love is adventuresome
FIRE
Passionate love
Mixed with emotions
Expressed hot under the flames
There is nothing else to prove
Our love is been approved
WATER
Draining your love in me, I relish
Making me swamped with emotions
The time has come to reveal a secret wish
Its a gift from you I always cherish
My ground has been nourished
EARTH
The fruit of Life has born soon
Spreading its root in the rigid ground
Holding to me in the rough and tough of our life
Accomplishing dreams with my little companion
To the path of stabilization
you are super talented, see, within a few hours, your poem is up and perfect for the theme....
ReplyDeleteway to go.
love your talent,
beautiful entry...
Thank you Jingle!
ReplyDeleteHello Umamaheswari. Using the Four Elements for inspiration has resulted in four touching poems. And your photo pulls it all together. I love writing about Mother Earth and the feminine. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteYou are so right that there are five elements not four but.... like you said we are doing a prompt above 4. :) Your idea, poems, and music go together so well. Thanks it all warmed my heart. :)
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ReplyDelete@river Thanks for your comments.
Fantastic poem very articulate, thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteVery true, there are 5 elements but we thought to stay with just 4...you have done this to perfection...thanks so much for linking :) xx
ReplyDeleteFour excellent poems for the theme, ut I must say the first one is my favorite.
ReplyDeleteI love way you break it down! Killer poetic skills and I am so excited to connect through Jingle poetry!
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Nice concept and a related poetry on woman and nature.. Keep them coming more often related to nature.
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem :)
ReplyDeleteonly after reading your post i knew there was a theme. will work on it from the next week :P
i loved every word. your an awesome poet!!! :D
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ReplyDelete@harshika..I am happy that finally you have found out :)
Wow, you're so talented! Love your wriring style :) and the picture... I'm just mesmerized. Great post/poem!
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very clever..loved the idea, the theme and how you handled it..brilliant one shot..very nice :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem. Love the pic too.
ReplyDeletenice...all four come togther to make one...as in the pic...great one shot!
ReplyDeletePowerful ode to elements. Here is my contribution to One Shot this week - The Touch.
ReplyDeleteBeauty, love, the elements that surround us each day as well as a little more.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing with One Shot
Moon Smiles
Amazing :D~ The four elements you said it all=P
ReplyDeleteI loved how you interpreted a woman's emotions and feelings into the four elements--how creative!
ReplyDeleteYour different four verses are wonderful and touching as well as insightful. thanks for sharing...
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U diced each of the elements nicely.
ReplyDeleteCheers!
truly brilliant! this piece is perfect for this week's theme.
ReplyDeletebeautiful poetry containing the 4 elements.
ReplyDeleteWell crafted poetry
ReplyDeleteInteresting take on the four elements theme, Uma.
ReplyDeleteNice take on the One Shot, 4 elements of nature, and ending perfectly, grounded, with the earth.
ReplyDeleteGreat Earth-/nature-centric work, made better by its brief lines/structure. :)
ReplyDeleteI'm not a poetry person, but enjoyed reading your take on love using the four elements of nature. Very sensual!
ReplyDeleteYour poem on Fire is captivating. Loved the essence of this post and the poems in this post.
ReplyDeleteUsing the four elements to describe love and life -- well done.
ReplyDeletea nicely crafted, well thought out piece..thanks for sharing..pete
ReplyDeleteLovely poem. It's a lost art nowadays.
ReplyDeleteReally excellent poems
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wow! this is a unique way of describing the four elements.
ReplyDeleteevery poem is brilliant and that pic is breathtakingly beautiful.
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beautiful poem
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