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The Story of Rapunzel's Hair

Long Long ago, I grew long to flow
Wavy and sassy , chit chat as I go
I brush the soft walls on the towers
That measures my height as I reach lower
I am bathed in Lukewarm water
With natural herbs and natural colors
I am pampered with nourishing coconut oils
Carefully and neatly tied up to coil
My long golden mane with colorful ribbons
Adorned with flowers ,yellow and crimson
I am loved and taken care of so well
By a beautiful maiden named Rapunzel
I played messenger helping her find
Her true love role playing from behind
Up and down , In and out I go
Providing a only pathway to below
Until the wicked witch struck me upon
Cutting my beauty in two , one half down
Held wickedly on the hands of the witch
My other half on Rapunzel who's been ditched
I wander with her in the lonely woods
Unknown of the spell cast upon her only good
Finally, a rescue was bestowed through a Dove
To bring back my true long self and her True Love


Love and get loved - The story of Rapunzel's hair rescued through the Dove
One thing I loved about Rapunzel's hair is that she pampered her hair with love and affection which drove her to get healthier and long hair.I am not a Rapunzel but I can do what she does to her Hair [ pampering my hair to save what is left now :( ]

Life is fun when viewed from a different perspective ."Put yourself in other's shoe so you may know their pain" is a well known proverb. Now ,let me put it in a different way."Put yourself on the other side of the world say a dream world so that you may  know how beautiful your life is like a poetic world " . Chill !! :)


12 Responses to “The Story of Rapunzel's Hair”

Morning said...
Sunday, October 23, 2011

love happy endings,

cute dove, thanks for sharing.


The Orange Tree said...
Sunday, October 23, 2011

very perfect story in poetic form,
smiles.


Heaven said...
Sunday, October 23, 2011

Indeed it is a beauty.... thanks for sharing this ~


liv2write2day said...
Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Nice re-telling of the story, Uma. It's good to see you here.


Brian Miller said...
Tuesday, October 25, 2011

thank you for shining her light and message into our world for just a bit...nicely done tale...


Venice said...
Saturday, October 29, 2011

I love when people spin a poem, article, stories around fairy-tales - and you've done it so well! I loved the whole poem and the pictures too :)

Cheers,

Venice.


zongrik said...
Sunday, October 30, 2011

very cute nice rhyme


Farila said...
Monday, October 31, 2011

Another encounter with tangled and such a lovely encounter too...


specs buffy said...
Tuesday, November 01, 2011

Very imaginative - lovely !


The Poetry Palace said...
Wednesday, November 02, 2011

a story well told.


bemoneyaware said...
Monday, November 07, 2011

Liked the way u have used Rapunzel and Dove..very interesting..and creative.


Sampath said...
Wednesday, November 09, 2011

Well written post.
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