Wavy and sassy , chit chat as I go
I brush the soft walls on the towers
That measures my height as I reach lower
I am bathed in Lukewarm water
With natural herbs and natural colors
I am pampered with nourishing coconut oils
Carefully and neatly tied up to coil
My long golden mane with colorful ribbons
Adorned with flowers ,yellow and crimson
I am loved and taken care of so well
By a beautiful maiden named Rapunzel
I played messenger helping her find
Her true love role playing from behind
Up and down , In and out I go
Providing a only pathway to below
Until the wicked witch struck me upon
Cutting my beauty in two , one half down
Held wickedly on the hands of the witch
My other half on Rapunzel who's been ditched
I wander with her in the lonely woods
Unknown of the spell cast upon her only good
Finally, a rescue was bestowed through a Dove
To bring back my true long self and her True Love
Love and get loved - The story of Rapunzel's hair rescued through the Dove
One thing I loved about Rapunzel's hair is that she pampered her hair with love and affection which drove her to get healthier and long hair.I am not a Rapunzel but I can do what she does to her Hair [ pampering my hair to save what is left now :( ]
Life is fun when viewed from a different perspective ."Put yourself in other's shoe so you may know their pain" is a well known proverb. Now ,let me put it in a different way."Put yourself on the other side of the world say a dream world so that you may know how beautiful your life is like a poetic world " . Chill !! :)
love happy endings,
ReplyDeletecute dove, thanks for sharing.
very perfect story in poetic form,
ReplyDeletesmiles.
Indeed it is a beauty.... thanks for sharing this ~
ReplyDeleteNice re-telling of the story, Uma. It's good to see you here.
ReplyDeletethank you for shining her light and message into our world for just a bit...nicely done tale...
ReplyDeleteI love when people spin a poem, article, stories around fairy-tales - and you've done it so well! I loved the whole poem and the pictures too :)
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Venice.
very cute nice rhyme
ReplyDeleteAnother encounter with tangled and such a lovely encounter too...
ReplyDeleteVery imaginative - lovely !
ReplyDeletea story well told.
ReplyDeleteLiked the way u have used Rapunzel and Dove..very interesting..and creative.
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