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Wednesday, 22 May 2013

Haiku - Betrayal



Water to quench thirst
Look! Mirage in the desert
Betrayal of Eyes 


-written in response to Haiku Heights
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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousWednesday, May 22, 2013

    Nicely done! I like the use of mirage in your take.

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  2. KISLAYA GOPALWednesday, May 22, 2013

    That was good one, nature's betrayal, mirage in the desert

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  3. AnonymousWednesday, May 22, 2013

    Great job!

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  4. Tarang SinhaWednesday, May 22, 2013

    Nice take!:)

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  5. NankaThursday, May 23, 2013

    A nice take on the prompt!! A mirage can wreck a thirsty man much betrayed!!

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  6. Sri ValliFriday, May 24, 2013

    Eyes are misleading sometimes!
    Lovely Haiku!

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  7. Richa SinghFriday, May 24, 2013

    how lovely and true can be said for life also.... when we often hallucinate a happy end...

    Richa

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  8. Amrit SinhaFriday, May 31, 2013

    This one is classy ... loved it !!

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