I find writing poems using different poetry forms are fun and sometimes challenging.You can very see me doing this act on my blog .Today at NaPoWriMo , I came across a new poetry form called as "hay(na)ku", a verse form similar to haiku officially inaugurated on the Web on June 12th, 2003 on Philippine Independence Day by Eileen Tabios.And the result is here below ,
What is Hay(na)ku ?
- The traditional form of Hay(na)ku is a tercet : 3 lines consisting of six(6) words in total in the order of (1-2-3) [1 in the first line, 2 in the second line, and 3 in the third line].
- There is no restriction on syllables or stressed or rhymes.
So with the prompt from Haiku-Heights "Still", I tried writing a Haiku and a multiple Haynaku :)
HAIKU :(5-7-5)
Endeavour thyself
To perceive the game called Life
I still fail to thee
HAYNAKU - LIFE
Cycles of birth
Countess times
Achieved
I still wait
To Perceive
Life
Each Birth Saw
Boundless Hearts
Bliss
Trial and error
With Thoughts
Inculcated
Love
I found
The Only Answer
On the Corner :
Is this we call that "Our Life is in our Hands?"
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lovely contemplative haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteLovely. I love that Haynaku style thx.
ReplyDeleteyou found answers in love? i found only questions!!
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Wow thanks! Now I can practice the Haynaku style. Will probably take me a while to get comfortable with it. I just usually put my pencil or pen to paper and write. I need to learn so many other styles. Thanks! Be blessed.
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