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Wednesday 29 December 2010

Shape of a Rose Poem or Concrete poem of Sun

Concrete or Shape poem: These types of poem represent objects which they represent like a  circle,triangle or a star,etc  and the poem can be written in these shapes.I chose the shape of rose to represent love because we refer red rose to love. And finally I concluded with a Sun poem in shape of the Sun.


Love Red Rose

Sunshine Poem




31 comments:

  1. woww... the rose looks adorable :D
    indeed it is filled with color of heart... beautiful verses :)

    do check out mine here
    http://thepoetrywagon.blogspot.com/2010/12/shape-poetryshop-o-holic.html

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  2. Thank you,looks like we research the poetry forms :)

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  3. I love this new concept of writing poetry. So lovely.

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  4. love both shapes,

    red rose is sweet, sun is bright...
    you rock!
    Thanks for the inspiration and contribution.
    Happy Rally.
    Happy 2011.

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  5. lovely to look and to read. Well done! and thanks for your kind comments

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  6. lovely rose, i will give it to someone special.. Here is mine, ! Wishes !

    Happy Rally, Wish you a very Happy New Year 2011 !

    --Someone is Special--

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  7. Very much enjoyed your shape poetry. They are lovely. Happy New Year.

    my rally: http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/12/30/darkness-is-only-a-degree-of-light/

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  8. wow...i really want to try out shape poetry...but this was beautiful..both...

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  9. Lovely work on the concrete poems! I've only just started to get a real appreciation for it, and you have two marvelous shapes.

    Happy New Year!

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  10. Thanks for the rose... :)
    Very artistic and creative..
    Shine brightly...
    Have a great day :)

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  11. Very innovative! Lovely thoughts to go with it.Happy new year!

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  12. super man!! :D

    but how do u do it? it's beyond me.. :(

    im never able to understand how to write in shapes :(

    loved the poem :)

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  13. wow.. that is very beautiful shape poetry, Uma :) loved it..

    Why The Hesitation? My Rally Week 36 Poetry

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  14. Lovely rose with words on it... :)
    really enjoyed the poem.
    Thanks for motivating me with your shape poem will try it.

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  15. Wow...very creative! Very well worded.
    Hema

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  16. lup dup is cute haha! mine for this thursday- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/14/hunger/

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  17. Incredibly Creative! Awesome i liked both the rose and the sun poems picturing them as well as expressing their nature,quality,or for what they represent! Hats off to you for coming up with such wonderful creativity!

    poetlatha.blogspot.com

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  18. @all Thanks for the appreciation

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  19. Thank you for my rose, the only one I will receive today I am sure, so it is much appreciated. Your talents are conveyed quite nicely, graphics, words, sentiments, just lovely :)

    Thank you
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/

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  20. Visually stimulating and well written. Great Job!
    Happy Potluck! here's mine... http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2011/02/13/this-feeling/

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  21. Like the sun poem! :) thanks for the share

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  22. Beautiful shapes filled with wondrous word. Thank you for the rosse & sun
    Here are mine:
    http://louisedouglas.wordpress.com/2011/02/13/goodbyes/
    http://louisedouglas.wordpress.com/2011/02/13/to-my-love/

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  23. hi uma and i love your concrete poem.. here's my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/05/11/happily-tied/

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  24. Hello, Thanks for the love to Poetry Potluck! You Rock!

    Awards 4 Poetry Potluck Week 22, Enjoy!

    Your contribution means a world to us, Happy Thursday!
    See you next time!
    xoxox

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  25. wow.
    this is wonderful...
    thanx for visiting me...

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  26. i like the rose one but i wish it said the author.

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  27. WoW! amazingly done, apt shape and poem

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