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| Magpie Picture Prompt |
A tinge of yellow
rotating at high speed
shines brighter
to a full yellow circle
throu' the effect of
spinning blades
recalls resemblance
a bright ball of fire
spinning around
marking the Sun by
gravitational mass
Black holes ,do they
exist in the above both
between
the producer of wind
and
the generator of heat
without which my earth
challenges to exist ?
This is me :
To bring out the sparkling light of creativeness in you ,
you got to burn the oil of time and space - ©Umamaheswari Anandane
Redundant phrasing - Words, phrases, lines, stanzas, even, that are unnecessary according to me are :[ rotating ] at [high] [ speed], [The spinning] I repeated ,[by] gravitational [ mass] and between [the producer of wind] and [the generator of heat]
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