Tuesday, 28 December 2010

The New Year has began

VILLANELLE: 
  1. A poetic form to express a feeling or an idea.
  2. It has a total of 19 lines in the pattern of 3-3-3-3-3-4 i.e in five tercets and a concluding quatrain.
  3. Except the second line in each stanza ,all other lines Rhymes.
  4. Two lines the first and third in the  first stanza are repeated along the poems in the pattern of
               1st  stanza - A1-b-C1
                2nd stanza -a-b-A1
                3rd stanza -a-b-C1
                4th stanza-a-b-C1
                5th stanza-a-b-c1
              6th stanza-a-b-A1 -C1, Where " a not repeated but rhymes, and b not repeated and does not   rhymes" and  " A1, C1 repeated and rhymes"
The New Year has Began

The countdown has began 5,4,3,2,and one ,ring the bell
Here opens the door to unveil the shades of the past
The new year has come to our rescue ,my angel

By physical apperance and in maturity level
We all grow and still grow with each new year
The countdown has began 5 ,4,3,2,and one,ring the bell

Age knew no bounds to express joy ,we pray to impel
Opening arms wide to the opportunity that's ahead
The new year has come to our rescue,my angel

To learn and to forget the good and the bad to excel
We are ready to unveil the new years screen aside
The countdown has began 5 ,4,3,2,and one,ring the bell

There is no end to anything in this world in wheel
Each thing moves on a circle to continue again anew
The new year has come to our rescue,my angel

Believe in the oneness as we welcome 1-1-11 to laurel
For to carry us along with it to spread joy in and out of each heart 
The new year has come to our rescue, my angel
The countdown has began 5 ,4,3,2,and one,ring the bell

Wishing You All A Happy New Year !
By: Umamaheswari Anandane

10 comments:

  1. this is supper beautiful...
    your creativity amazes me...


    I added your link in to nominate, we have about more than 500 poets in our community, I never intend to upset or ignore, but fall short of time and energy in nominating all and every single one of them... if a poet ask, I will add,

    you can still vote and win even if I did not nominate you.
    Glad to see you come to potluck...

    A++

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  2. 5,4,3,2, and 1...
    Amazing...and what a way to say New Year...with a villanelle...I love this form a lot..and you have done very well with it.. :)

    I have written a villanelle myself..
    It was for halloween though..but fun to read..
    check it out when you have time...

    http://myriad-sumit.blogspot.com/2010/10/children-are-out-of-their-houses.html

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  3. So beautifully written. Loved this form of poetry...

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  4. I have not worked on a vilanelle yet. I appreciate your clear explaination.

    The poem is pure fun.

    Happy New Year (come to the rescue). I hope you are enjoying Potluck visits and visitors.

    Poem on ...

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  5. @sumit-Thnx and I will visit you soon
    @short poems-your valuable comments are always welcomed
    @jamie-Thnx,I do enjoy visits and visitors to my blog and hope to get more visitors by posting more poems in the coming New Year...your visit makes my day :)

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  6. Wonderful poem..
    Thanks for the explanation.Otherwise I would never have known the technical details and the effort you have taken.

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  7. A nice villanelle Uma.
    Happy New Year to you!
    Pamela

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  8. Ring the bell for the new year has come. Your poem is beautiful. thank you for sharing.

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  9. I like this concept. I visited your blog for the first time and just been your fan. Keep posting as I am gonna come to read it everyday..
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