I feel that Poems are written to express the feelings in a more beautiful way.Poems are itself a story,a moral and the feeling of the writer.Its a wonderful way of conveying message.Poems add beauty to love especially when we write poems for our mother's love.She herself is a poem that cannot be viewed with normal eyes.Her dedication in bringing us in a most beautiful way as possible and mainly the sacrifices that she makes for her children's happiness all through her whole life.You can understand best the feelings of your mother if you are a mom or going to be one .Mother- a poem that lasts forever .
Dancing lady sacrifices herself
Drops of hot tears of happiness
Melting her way down in the dark
Spreading light for her Children's Life
Sacred
Sacred
Only Mother's Love
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I appeciate this poem..so real and true!Only Mothers can have the heart to sacrifice for their loved ones
ReplyDelete@anonymous...Thanks and yes,I agree
ReplyDeleteLovely 160. A parent gives so much for their children, so much for love, for another's life...beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI feel that poems are as close to our subliminal emotions as one may achieve and you have a beautiful heart.Peace be with you.
ReplyDelete@all Thanks.Its true we children can never repay them for all that they do for us.If you are a woman and a mother,you can understand this feeling better.
ReplyDeleteMother's love is very special...and sacred! Your poem conveys this well. I am a grandmother, which is a close second!
ReplyDeletespreading light for her children's love....lovely line ...blessings..bkm
ReplyDeleteUma, I like the poem and I love my Mom
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I love the title, and the metaphor of the hot candle wax tears spreading light for her children's lives......very beautiful concept!
ReplyDelete@All..lots of positive comments form all of you.Thanks!
ReplyDeletehot tears of happiness, that's way too cool!
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Spreading light for her Children's Life
ReplyDeleteloved this line so much... beautfully written.