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Tuesday, 26 October 2010

Seed Optimism

I have written these three Haiku's themed Optimism in  5-7-5 format

Optimism dawns
When the troubled mind networks
Good music and friends

To keep your balance
In the journey of your life
You have to Move on        -inspired by Albert Einstein



Dangerous journey
I was destined to grow here
With pride , I still grow

23 comments:

  1. wonderfully penned haikus :D brilliant.

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  2. Wow love your 3 Haiku. But no. 3 and its picture take my breath away!

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  3. Nice, Uma. I especially like "troubled mind networks, good music and friends." I've tried my hand a poetry lately. It's difficult, but rewarding.

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  4. Your poems are wonderful. I especially like the last one!

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  5. @My well wishers above :)...Thanks to let me write more

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  6. nice inspirational poem

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  7. move on,
    get happy with friends and more.
    lovely Haiku,
    love your attitude here.

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  8. Love these optimism promoting haiku. Just lovely. Moving on - that is sometimes so hard to do. I am in the middle of it.

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  9. Awesome all of them...I love the third one more though...
    Thank you... :)

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  10. @ALL Thanks 4 the comments

    @little hat-very true..I agree that moving on is hard to do but still these inspirational words gives up some hope to hold on to our life.When we boost our self-confidence ,we finally see us moving on..I learn and still learn to live and I write optimistic poems to keep " My Balance " in My Life :)....

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  11. http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/11/02/the-celebrate-poet-of-september-awards-officially-won-via-votes/

    the celebrate poet of September award for you,
    plus the honorable mention,
    Enjoy!
    u rock!

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  12. Wonderful Haiku and yes I agree that we have to move on to keep balance in life's journey.

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  13. lovely Haikus.

    I usually write randomly, today tries harder to fit the requirement, yet not exactly perfect.

    Thanks.

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  14. So much in these haikus, Uma. Wonderful work.

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  15. Wonderful haikus! I love the image for Number 3 and its message!

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  16. o! I thank you for that little branch, you sure gave it a voice, :) a sweet one as that

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  17. A beautiful and powerful haiku to complete the challenge. Thank you for helping me grow.

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  18. cool sentiments...


    come on in.

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  19. Wondeful expression for the seedling. Sometimes the seeds take root in the most difficult of places.

    Would love to see you at the March Challenge! www.cloakedmonk.com

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  20. wonderful haiku's. the third one's my favorite. super work!

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  21. Awesome seedling image paired with your Haiku - love the message! ~becca

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