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This sounds like a vicious kind of pain, wounding deeply!
Very intriguing. It begs for more to be told.
Love and its burning sensation and its leftovers... magic-drawn portrait.
It happens.. time heals..when mind helps it.. you have put it accross beautifully..
a haiku that leaves something more to be asked.. wonder what's ahead. lovely take! :)
strong imagery, impressing!
it wishes to be written.to get another from.to sustain or live, alone.
@all - thanks , hmm...so you all want to know more about it.well,you will.
impressive.
What an emotional haiku. Nicely written.
Well done but I agree that I am intrigued so much I don't want it to end
beautiful
powerfully stated
This sounds like a vicious kind of pain, wounding deeply!
ReplyDeleteVery intriguing. It begs for more to be told.
ReplyDeleteLove and its burning sensation and its leftovers... magic-drawn portrait.
ReplyDeleteIt happens.. time heals..when mind helps it.. you have put it accross beautifully..
ReplyDeletea haiku that leaves something more to be asked.. wonder what's ahead. lovely take! :)
ReplyDeletestrong imagery, impressing!
ReplyDeleteit wishes to be written.
ReplyDeleteto get another from.
to sustain or live, alone.
@all - thanks , hmm...so you all want to know more about it.well,you will.
ReplyDeleteimpressive.
ReplyDeleteWhat an emotional haiku. Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteWell done but I agree that I am intrigued so much I don't want it to end
ReplyDeletebeautiful
ReplyDeletepowerfully stated
ReplyDelete