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I was walking back from school
Enjoying the weather moist and cool
I was covered fully from head to toe
Holding my little one and walking slow
Yelp! she cried ,"Mommy,its raining"
Though it was a harmless rain falling
To prevent ourselves from any disaster
We had to run fast for our Shelter
SPIRITUALITY OF THE RAIN
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Uma, both pieces are delightful.
ReplyDeleteRain has such a cleansing effect.
Pamela
Love the flow of this and the description of the rain.
ReplyDeleteCool concept to combine home and outside and use the image. Enjoyed, especially the second stanza on the image.
ReplyDeleteDear Uma,
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What a splash,dear!
Beautiful picture and lovely words!
I love pitter patter raindrops
Falling through the leaves
And on my tiled roof...
Wishing you a wonderful day ahead,
Sasneham,
Anu
interesting use of the prompt words and I like what you've done with them.
ReplyDeleteVery nice site, actually is my pleasure add it on my favorite ones. Great job, dear friend. Carlos from Brazil was here.
ReplyDelete@ all-lovely that you enjoyed reading my poems and thanks for the comments
ReplyDelete@self-taught -I am happy to be a part of your blog that is created for a cause.Thanks for your visit!
Gentle.
ReplyDeleteyeah, keep running and find your shelter.
ReplyDeletelovely rain poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Your words and music match the beauty of rain.
ReplyDeleteloved the different takes on rain...
ReplyDeleteNothing can beat the feel of first rain...
beautiful writes
lovely.. thank you for sharing. congrats on your perfect poet award wk 36.. here’s mine for this thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/19/the-tears/
ReplyDeleteLoved both pieces. Nice depth within the verses of the latter piece. Well done/.
ReplyDeleteA litany for rain. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteAahh... loved the soothing nature of these poems...
ReplyDeleteVery recently, I experienced similar sensations flooding my mind while I was walking as it was snowing.. it was simply amazing... the little flakes landing on me, and melting to my warmth.. a very lovely feeling indeed! And that's when I got all nostalgic about the Mumbai rains.. :)
aawwww...that was sooo sweettt :D
ReplyDeletelovely poem :D
here from Jingle's Rally.. You can find my poem at
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2011/01/12/i-dance/
Such a beautiful representation of rain. I like the spiritual connection.
ReplyDeleteA melody of rain ... lovely poem:)
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful medley of rain poems! Thanks for sharing. :)
ReplyDeleteenjoyed reading the compilation of styles...very nice. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteSpell binding.. both the pieces are enchanting..
ReplyDeleteI love rains besides enjoying winters- but not so much the puddles.. :(
Love xxx
beautiful rainy poems..
ReplyDeleteloved them...
:)
Good flow, word choices.
ReplyDeleteHappy Tuesday.
ReplyDeleteVery nice page, loved your creative work!
ReplyDeleteShort Poems
Cold rain evokes feelings of security in the sheltered. Yes, I found meaning in all these delightful little poems, even the image of running to protect you and your infant from 'imagined' disasters!
ReplyDeleteBoth of these are very nice - it's always funny how our first response is to get out of the rain and yet we shower and swim. hmmm. Like your style.
ReplyDeleteThese are quiet lovely; though the second one stole my heart!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed both of these. Very nice, Honey.
ReplyDeleteBoth beautiful.
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