Three Haiku's (5-7-5) for you wherein the serenity plays different roles of helping one's mind to calmness in the first poem and alluring one's mind to calmness in the second poem .In the last poem the serenity is Balanced.
Leads thy mind to thwart
Obsession needs a rescue
Serenity Aids!
So deep is your love
When I look into your eyes
Confessed serene look
 The Seven Sins of Wrath ,Greed,Sloth,Pride,Lust,Spite,Gorge Destroys Serenity Balance them with love Your heart becomes a temple Where serene lasts ever |
Written in response to
Haiku Heights!
The Seven Sins Prompt by Jingle Poetry
What a wonderful Haiku!Loved them both.
ReplyDeletelove this,
ReplyDeletevery cute.
Uma,
ReplyDeleteBeautiful haikus.
Pamela
awesome ones Uma :)
ReplyDeleteloved the way you worked them together :D
very creative - wise advice
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Gabi
love them....beautifully done.
ReplyDelete@all Thanks for your comments!
ReplyDeleteI liked those.. and how you made the sinful one ... just the opposite.. nice :)
ReplyDeleteNice little pieces, quite lovely haikus, with some interesting pictures as well. Well done!
ReplyDeleteGood piece, sweet starters.
ReplyDeleteI liked these.
simple but good...
ReplyDeletegreat haiku-- ;)
ReplyDeleteSerenity definitely plays an important role in one's personal happiness...I like how you weaved that concept in these pieces...nicely done. (^_^)
ReplyDeleteLoved all of them...so beautiful... :)
ReplyDelete@all Thanks !I am and will try to impress you all with different forms of poem so that you enjoy being with me friends :)
ReplyDeleteNice to meet you, Uma!
ReplyDeleteIt can be fun to take a word
and play with it -- until you own it.
Serenity has now been added to your repertoire.
Peace, Uncle Tree
Loved your haikus
ReplyDeleteregards
Luke @ WordSalad
@me2watson - very true.We poeters love words that crafts our poem into beautiful shape.The skeleton of the poem is the words,without it poems are never a poem.
ReplyDelete@luke-Thanks!
Ah my friend love all three. You really get to the meaning.
ReplyDeleteMelanie
wonderful haikus.. Loved them :)
ReplyDeleteRegards~ Sayan
Succinct and soooo well expressed, I loved it so...thanks xx
ReplyDeleteYou are an inspiration. Poetry heals. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeletegreat little thoughts on a deep emotion, nicely written.
ReplyDeleteSuperbly conveyed the serenity in different pieces!Pondicherrians are filled with serenity!Are the paintings and pictures yours...?
ReplyDeleteWell said and I love your words...Only love can balance them to give this world a serene atmosphere...:)
ReplyDeleteyes.. I remember reading this, Uma.. lovely words..
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