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Sunday, 25 September 2011

Haiku - Phoenix

Darkness, left alone
woman in black prayed
to embrace phoenix

Invisible light
that shone over the darkness
had raced from her  heart

She , a strong woman 
allowed herself to embrace
into divine light
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14 comments:

  1. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarrySunday, September 25, 2011

    bless for her.

    love it.

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  2. Tess KincaidSunday, September 25, 2011

    Love the strength portrayed here...

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  3. Chronicles of IllusionsSunday, September 25, 2011

    love the thought of embracing into divine light

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  4. miss pieSunday, September 25, 2011

    i have enjoyed reading the posts from this week's magpie... it is good to read of a strong woman in the divine light overcoming darkness..

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  5. FireblossomSunday, September 25, 2011

    I really like that ending, dear. :-)

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  6. Lady EmSunday, September 25, 2011

    Beautiful! Love love love the ending!

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  7. Kay L. DaviesSunday, September 25, 2011

    You've said so much, in so few words. Well done.

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  8. Ramesh SoodSunday, September 25, 2011

    Vary beautifully thought out.. a powerful haiku..like phoenix..

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  9. Brian MillerMonday, September 26, 2011

    nice...particularly like the last stanza...

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  10. andy sewinaMonday, September 26, 2011

    Phew, love the bit about divine light!

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  11. Traci BMonday, September 26, 2011

    Wonderful take on the HH prompt and the photo. Uplifting and encouraging verses here.

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  12. Emanita01Tuesday, September 27, 2011

    Hadn't noticed there was divine light in this image to write about till I read this. Thanks :-D

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  13. Isabel DoyleWednesday, September 28, 2011

    power to her

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  14. Elvira Lobo(Elli)Wednesday, January 11, 2012

    beautifully written!!!

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