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Saturday, 2 April 2011

Haiku - P.U.P.P.E.T



Maneuvered with skill
Humans pursuits their existence 
In Puppet factory



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9 comments:

  1. Gemma WisemanSaturday, April 02, 2011

    Love that last image of humans being in a "puppet factory"! A powerful, poetic comment!

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  2. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSaturday, April 02, 2011

    true,
    aptly shown...

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  3. JamieDedesSunday, April 03, 2011

    Very good, Uma. Love the illustration too.

    Here to let you know you are featured today on Jingle Poetry, Sunday Rally Dispatch.

    Thank you and good luck with the challenge. :-)

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  4. Celestial DreamzSunday, April 03, 2011

    how true! beautifully expressed. :)

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  5. Priyanka BhowmickSunday, April 03, 2011

    working hard makes you a puppet at times... nice one

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  6. AnonymousSunday, April 03, 2011

    Clever take on the prompt ...

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  7. Amanda MooreMonday, April 04, 2011

    it can be sad when humans fall prey to puppetry from others. I really enjoyed this poem

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  8. trishaTuesday, April 05, 2011

    splendid uma, fantastic haiku.

    trisha
    http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/04/04/free-soul-4-4-11/

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  9. The Book of Shadows (The Dark Side)Tuesday, April 05, 2011

    Mine is up too for puppet.. http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/04/get-to-know-ting-gkt10-my-poetweets-3.html

    I like the words you used to express.. as always, colourful.. :)

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