Rani Lakshmi Bai,The Queen
An epitome of bravery and courage
Lead her army in 1857
To defend Jhansi
For Indian Revolution against British Colonialism.
The above poem is written in 5W form using the five 'W" questions for Magpie prompt.
The Warrior
Warrior , he is the One
Wandering around the army field
Wringing their withers out
Watching over 24 hrs a day
Wondrous defender of the country
Walking over the challenges thrown to them
Wisely through his dedicated body and soul
Where he stood on the border feeling
Worthy of guarding his love at home
Worship , his love .....
The above poem uses Acrostics "W" poetry.
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Fight the power! An inspired poem.
ReplyDeleteI had thought of her too today at Magpie Tales :) besides others like Tipu and Shivaji!! You have done it well here!!
ReplyDeleteWonderful - both of them. And you have given me homework to do. Now I will have to read up on Rani Lakshmi Bai. Thanks, Uma!
ReplyDeleteNice write...
ReplyDeleterob kistner
Image & Verse
never heard about her...but i love brave women..thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteBoth wonderful pieces, reminders of the fight for what is thought to be right.
ReplyDeleteNicely done! I like this story...
ReplyDeleteWonderful 5-dub!
ReplyDeleteWow!!! wonderful... What to say... want of words..is my wont here.. Well weaved..
ReplyDeleteBrave and beautiful! :-)
ReplyDeletegreat poem and perfect for the prompt!
ReplyDeleteNice tribute to Rani Lakshmi Bhai. And thanks for introducing me to one more new poetry form.
ReplyDeleteNice poems ... I especially like the story of India's epitome of female bravery!
ReplyDeleteWell done!
ReplyDeleteWow...
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem!
Written with enthusiasm and vigor...
Well done!! :))
Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteWondering,
What all simple
Women have to do, to remain
Warriors of the every day life!