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Wednesday, 9 February 2011

The Avatar

The Avatar :
It is an embodiment  to give a concrete or visible form to someone or something. I tried my hand in combination of Loop poetry and Haiku's. I chose the theme "Avatar" ( "Avadaram" in Tamil ) .

Spirituality
Freedom of the Physical Self
An Avatar is born


An Avatar is born
With bad memories washed away
He Chose to do good


He Chose to do good
For what he is born today
Called this change "Avatar"
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8 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue SkySunday, February 20, 2011

    Starkly powerful. Interesting form.

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  2. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSunday, February 20, 2011

    love your imagination.
    brilliant one.

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  3. eyeographyMonday, February 21, 2011

    A great tribute to the movie..
    All three haikus are excellent :)

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  4. AnonymousSunday, February 27, 2011

    Great! I am encourage to give birth to Avatar! :)

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  5. AnonymousMonday, February 28, 2011

    That works really well!
    Like the spacing on the last line.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/02/28/sci-fi-hi/

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  6. AnonymousMonday, February 28, 2011

    This is great. I like how you wove the haiku with the repeated lines, Uma.

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  7. AnonymousMonday, February 28, 2011

    He chose to do good! Wish more people could make this transformation!

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  8. JamieDedesThursday, March 03, 2011

    He passed on through the river of forgetfullness and chose to do good. Avatar or Avalokitesvara? I didn't see the movie.

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