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| GOLDEN FISH - GOLDEN WORDS |
Any swords or knife that tears
Bears no lasting wounds forever
Clingy sarcastic words and sayings creates
Deeper wounds that heal never
Eternal fake smile and tainted hearts
Finds no plausible contentment in life
Greater than a calmed soul which reaches
Higher contentment slowly ...so
Inculcate a willingness to Love
Jack of all arts and
King of none makes
Little Tom to act like a
Monkey on a Banyan Tree
Never estimate the talent
Of others because each one exhibits
Performance in their own unique way
Quails are better singers
Rather than peacock who is still unique in its beauty
Search and embark to learn forever - our Life is
Teaching us new things in this stay on our
Unique earth that is a part of the big universe
Vacuum the dirts that lingers in our heart
Warm it up with positive hopes and thoughts
X-ray each deeds you do and say
Yearn to fill the emptiness
Zeal will fill you and be with you always
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Love this!
ReplyDeletethat is beautifully done :D
ReplyDeleteloved the form ... well expressed
Hey! You did the ABC thing too! Cool!
ReplyDelete(That "X" is a pain in the butt, ain't it?)
Thanks friends :)
ReplyDelete@Eric - yes but with 'thesaurus' things seemed to be a bit simpler ;)
How clever of you to use the Abecedarian form! Brava! Your 'examples' do indeed fill the emptiness. ☼
ReplyDeleteWhat an effort and imagination and creativity and I am happy to have read it.. wow!!
ReplyDeleteQuite an interesting form, depth, creativity, sensing deeper meanings, deeper yearnings for the flow.
ReplyDeleteWow! That was so well done!
ReplyDelete@all Thanks to drop by and post your valuable comment
ReplyDeleteyeah, you got the goodness award...
ReplyDeletekeep it up.
;)
loved the depth of meaning in this.
ReplyDelete"Eternal fake smile and tainted hearts
ReplyDeleteFinds no plausible contentment in life
Greater than a calmed soul which reaches
Higher contentment slowly ...so
Inculcate a willingness to Love"...
This is awesome..love your work :)
This is beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThis is very well done. I love the use of the ABCs. And congratulations on the publishing of your poetry book.
ReplyDeleteN-ever estimate the talent
ReplyDeleteO-f others...
NO to underestimation! Terrific poem! :)
very talented acrostics.
ReplyDeletewell done.
A++
well done- cleverly and thoughtfully worded
ReplyDeleteA creative take on alphabets! Well written :)
ReplyDeleteLove xox
Wonderful, and you've inspired me to use the alphabet to create something.
ReplyDeletethis was quite an exercise, nicely pulled together.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully crafted...
ReplyDeleteFrom A to Z the poem appealed to me. Well written!
ReplyDeletegreat uma! thank you for sharing this! my late potluck haha- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/03/08/nectar-from-heaven/
ReplyDeleteAn acrostic with such an awesome message!! Superbly written, Uma! I LOVED JKLM :)
ReplyDeletereally loved it, the acrostic with the ABC, wonderful..
ReplyDeletenow that's just darn creative and cunning - great write!
ReplyDeleteVery well done. These are wonderful thoughts.
ReplyDeleteSo unique! And with a nice message.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful way to ABC your through a difficult word.
ReplyDeletewhat a fantastic acrostic just loved every bit of it!
ReplyDeleteYou have all the letters of the alphabet here. Quite a feat. My favorite line is "Warm it up with positive hopes and thoughts." Inspiring words here.
ReplyDeleteNice flow of words and thoughts.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.Loved it.
Very ambitious undertaking! Loved the image of a calmed soul reaching contentment slowly.
ReplyDeletewhat creative and smart a-z piece.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing.
:)
Very innovative and convincing at the same time.
ReplyDeleteThough I shall ask you to reconsider Line 4 of Stanza 1. Shouldn't there be 'heal' instead of 'heals', considering you have used 'wounds' before?
@all Thanks for your attention :)
ReplyDelete@mihirvatsa ..will consider
well fine
ReplyDeleteWonderful words.. and very true! :)
ReplyDeleteHere's my entry this week: http://wp.me/p1hI0l-7w
Extraordinary creative format! The colored words also add a whole level of intricacy. I very much enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteWow! What a creative way to present such profound expressions. I really enjoyed it from A to Zed! Blessings!
ReplyDeletehttp://kaysalady.wordpress.com/2011/08/30/my-mind-is-frozen/
vacuum the dirt that lingers in our hearts - I like that.
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