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Thursday, 11 November 2010

Lord Hanuman-Acrostic


golden Heart Lord Hanuman
flies Above the blue sky
through Narrow clouds
to Unlease Sita, Lord Rama's love
is Majestic in his powers of
breaking All the barriers and
is Noteworthed for his devotion in helping all





The Above poem is written based on a picture prompt by Magpie Tales.I can identify the Lord Hanuman in gold lying on a soft blue cloth (sky) with white perals (clouds) around and so my poem took shape in form a Acrostic' HANUMAN' .Read  it again and you will get to know more .

19 comments:

  1. Noteworthy for his devotion in helping all. This acrostic, Hanuman, tells the story. Thanks for sharing.

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  2. Amazing..I really liked your view...
    :)

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  3. You guessed Hanuman and so did I.

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  4. beautiful devotion in your acrostic Uma.. my take is a haiku, and we have also identified with the beads in similar manner I see :)

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  5. Beautiful poem..
    You have portayed Hanuman wonderfully with so few words...

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  6. Your acrostic is lovely ....

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  7. You have encompassed so much in your verse - well done.

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  8. Nicely incorporated acrostic. Well done!

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  9. wonderful acrostic... well written

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  10. I liked your Acrostic I will have to try that form soon!

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  11. beautiful prayer in verse...Hanuman must find pleasure in this write.....bkm

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  12. Short and sweet novel Acrostic poem,enclosed in a nutshell is his story! Very creative!

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  13. Beautiful poem as they say

    Bol siya pati hanuman ki JAI :)

    I am actually very fascinated with the stories an laural behind Hanuman... Have tried to read a lot...

    Bikram's

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  14. Thanks! Enjoyed the acrostic and the history!

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  15. This is so beautiful :)
    Creativity and spirituality entwined. Magic :)

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  16. Lovely poem Uma. Shri Hanumanji kee Jai....

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  17. Lovely, encompassing piece well shared.

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