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Friday, 29 October 2010

A Remembrace

HAIKU POEM

Memories are left
To be engraved on the stone
A remembrance



Stones
They are noT
But your inscriptioN
Written among lot of burieD
Souls that have lived before on eartH.
I have come to see you in the graveyard witH
My grandma who bouqueted some flowers for yoU
And places on the top of your house that encloses youR
Remains of this world.She wants to reconnect this world of herS
To yours just to let you know that she still loves you and remembers yoU.


Written for the picture prompt in Magpie Tales
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21 comments:

  1. Brian MillerFriday, October 29, 2010

    a sweet magpie...i like to walk among the stones...

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  2. Jidhu JoseFriday, October 29, 2010

    Wow....I like the way u express ur thoughts

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  3. eyeographyFriday, October 29, 2010

    Wow...I like the haiku...
    Love the "Stones" one.... :)

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  4. Ramesh SoodSaturday, October 30, 2010

    Well done Uma.. beautiful..liked it..

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  5. AnonymousSaturday, October 30, 2010

    Both of these are quite well written. I too am a love of your Haiku.Love and Light, Sender

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  6. Carrie Van HornSaturday, October 30, 2010

    This is beautiful Uma...:-)

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  7. Tess KincaidSaturday, October 30, 2010

    Nice. I like the monument shape, too.

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  8. Uma AnandaneSaturday, October 30, 2010

    @ALL Thanks..your comments always are valued

    @Jingle ..lol..no problem..your visit to my blog is much valued :)

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  9. Abhilasha-The DesireSunday, October 31, 2010

    this is very beautiful uma ..well done !!

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  10. Vinay Leo R.Sunday, October 31, 2010

    I like the haiku best, Uma.. it says a lot more than the bigger one I felt! :)

    My Magpie

    PS: Thanks for the lovely BAT topic for November!

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  11. Angie MuresanSunday, October 31, 2010

    This is a beautiful Magpie, Uma. Both the Haiku and the poem are very nice, but the Haiku is my favorite, I think.

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  12. The Blog of BeeSunday, October 31, 2010

    This is so nice.

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  13. kaykualaMonday, November 01, 2010

    Uma, I like your style. Haiku imposed discipline and u did wonderfully well.

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  14. girl daydreamingMonday, November 01, 2010

    sweet haiku! such a testament of a few words full of meaning.

    'Stones they are not' when one remembers with love and wonder. Very nice writing!

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  15. BikramTuesday, November 02, 2010

    a beautful poem, loved it ... i dont think i can ever write such nicely WELL DONE YOU !!!!!!!!

    Bikram's

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  16. AnonymousTuesday, November 02, 2010

    Interesting pyramid of words!

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  17. TeresaTuesday, November 02, 2010

    This is such a lovely poem of remembrance. I love the pyramid shape, like it is a pyramid for the deceased.

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  18. ReflectionsTuesday, November 02, 2010

    Sweet, interesting tributary by form... nicely done.

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  19. AnonymousWednesday, November 03, 2010

    Love the layout - it works so well with the content.

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  20. KavitaThursday, November 04, 2010

    A fantastic tribute!
    And the visual you have created with your amazing words - really nice!!
    Keep up the awesomeness, Uma!

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  21. AnonymousThursday, November 04, 2010

    Loved this remembrance poem, Uma. You are very expressive.

    I also love to try my hand at haiku--I enjoyed reading yours today.

    Gayle xoxo

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