I am caught up in the top part
Feeling strong but afraid I will fall back apart
I am caught at the bottom part
Feeling strong to make again to the top to restart
Grains of sand I am thought of
But not,I am grain of tiny men thereof
Waiting for my turn to go up and down
Swirling inside the hourglass town
You and me,we push in to go first into the hourglass hone
As we are aware that Time and Tide waits for None
Poem written for Magpie Tales
well done!
ReplyDeleteI love the line "swirling around this hourglass town"....that is what life is exactly like at times...you put it in perspective here...bkm
ReplyDeleteTime and tide waits for none. This is so true! Nice Magpie.
ReplyDeleteIntriguing poem! I enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteexcellent piece.. very well penned!
ReplyDelete@all Thanks.Your comments are valuable and it is a motivator for writing more :)
ReplyDeletevery well done! Lovely to read out loud.
ReplyDeleteso true and beautiful!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant!! "Swirling inside the hourglass town" is beautifully said!! A very focused and refined write!!
ReplyDeleteExcellent truth put in very few words :) Liked it :)
ReplyDeleteThe 'swirling around in hourglass town' bit caught me as well! Very nice poem!
ReplyDeleteLovely poem this.. well done..
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love it.
ReplyDeletesuperb imagery.