tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post1046905791733562165..comments2024-02-02T19:22:16.209-08:00Comments on R H Y T H M U S : The Story Of Titanic With A Different ViewUma Anandanehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-73643621680350999282011-08-31T08:00:09.832-07:002011-08-31T08:00:09.832-07:00Great poem!Great poem!Rathnashikamanihttp://www.wikinut.com/in/rnqio/www.wikinut.com/i-see-poetry.../1zegn21g/2xe_b3pa/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-37124934236654798532011-08-21T09:23:18.736-07:002011-08-21T09:23:18.736-07:00Too many people commenting, and referring to the m...Too many people commenting, and referring to the movie. FORGET THE MOVIE! The Titanic was a real ship; it really sank, killing a lot of people. The movie was a load of rubbish - just Hollywood melodrama and romance. Get real people!<br /><br />Your post is very well written though.Altonianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841390371168941022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-42152044528338804922011-08-21T04:19:17.327-07:002011-08-21T04:19:17.327-07:00quite a long poem but joy to readquite a long poem but joy to readKodjo Deynoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01299996598769756878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-39395395277485276802011-07-28T13:25:39.268-07:002011-07-28T13:25:39.268-07:00Found you hanging at liv2write2day and followed yo...Found you hanging at liv2write2day and followed your link here.<br /><br />This story of the Titanic is at times real, at times surreal. Its epic length helps make it a fine tribute to "the ship God himself could not sink"...and yet, in man's hubris lies the fault.<br /><br />Great work! Amy<br />http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/07/28/grass/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-18103003377405833032011-07-28T10:08:14.344-07:002011-07-28T10:08:14.344-07:00Wow, Uma. Powerful take on this tragic story from ...Wow, Uma. Powerful take on this tragic story from a different point of view. I like it that you took it in that direction. Thanks for sharing it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-85157648507046056422011-03-14T07:19:43.020-07:002011-03-14T07:19:43.020-07:00SUPERB poem! It was sheer pleasure to read it!
He...SUPERB poem! It was sheer pleasure to read it!<br /><br />Here is my Sunday Scribbling post:<br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/03/unknown-gap.html" rel="nofollow">unknown gap</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-5530956160526113442011-03-13T17:05:28.362-07:002011-03-13T17:05:28.362-07:00Terrific historical-fiction, prose-poem! Mine is s...Terrific historical-fiction, prose-poem! Mine is so simple in comparison!<br />http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/03/13/big-love/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-30455348819723400022011-03-13T08:08:46.353-07:002011-03-13T08:08:46.353-07:00The Titanic also touched me deeply but good for yo...The Titanic also touched me deeply but good for you - you wrote a poem while I wallowed in depression for days. Glad I survived those feelings to be reminded again with a nice poem this time.Hazelhttp://hazelintheglen.wordpress.com/2011/03/13/beyond-the-milky-way/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-38897622483977274842011-03-13T05:46:19.249-07:002011-03-13T05:46:19.249-07:00i enjoyed this .. the easy flow made it worth fini...i enjoyed this .. the easy flow made it worth finishing fast !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-4765698708196118572011-03-13T00:23:51.330-08:002011-03-13T00:23:51.330-08:00Really well done!Really well done!Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-67649493794808065672011-02-12T14:23:23.956-08:002011-02-12T14:23:23.956-08:00@Thefridayforgotten
True and Thanks for dropping b...@Thefridayforgotten<br />True and Thanks for dropping by :)Uma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-37937367095908678712011-02-11T09:15:02.700-08:002011-02-11T09:15:02.700-08:00Thank you for visiting The Friday Forgotten and li...Thank you for visiting The Friday Forgotten and linking your post. Your imagination and creativity should never lie dusty in a dark corner of your blog. We are happy to help clear away the cobwebs.<br /><br />I never really considered the perspective of Murdoch till now. Thank you for that thought inducing tale.The Friday Forgottenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12201155900320067871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-75023697290608589102011-02-11T09:03:24.818-08:002011-02-11T09:03:24.818-08:00@Fireblossam -The typo was corrected.Thank you for...@Fireblossam -The typo was corrected.Thank you for dropping inUma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-69587659152293222782011-02-11T08:36:42.703-08:002011-02-11T08:36:42.703-08:00I enjoyed reading your piece and applaud your choi...I enjoyed reading your piece and applaud your choice of writing it from Murdoch's perspective.<br /><br />If I may, I think you mean "sea" not "see" in the first line. Good luck with your writing.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-68609429577992683562011-02-11T05:36:46.837-08:002011-02-11T05:36:46.837-08:00@Harshad
I agree with you since most of the time ...@Harshad<br />I agree with you since most of the time women are more sentimental than men.Women tend to rely on emotional feelings more ,with each drops that the eye melts ..you can see a story behind it.<br />Thank u for dropping byUma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-89667276302986749512010-12-31T05:29:51.159-08:002010-12-31T05:29:51.159-08:00I just loved your poem..I guess such emotion can b...I just loved your poem..I guess such emotion can be very effectevly elaborated by a female poetess. I still remember how bad I felt about Jack dying in the end. All I have to say is..<br /><br />Untill Today I felt sad for Jack<br />I was upset that why he could not get a floating sack.<br />But today I realized that there were also other people in the Titanic which made it so great<br />And I Harshadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16215617170669066953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-10153767849489716862010-11-02T11:33:50.470-07:002010-11-02T11:33:50.470-07:00@ALL Thanks..this is my first long narrative poem ...@ALL Thanks..this is my first long narrative poem with rhymying ends and I like it fully :)Uma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-78748879569190228502010-09-21T22:28:04.847-07:002010-09-21T22:28:04.847-07:00A fantastic and heart rending narration! It was li...A fantastic and heart rending narration! It was like watching the movie all over again! Very well done, my friend... <br /><br />And thank you so much for linking it with poetry potluck... this really was a treasure!!Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-26400480166763660252010-09-20T17:53:23.378-07:002010-09-20T17:53:23.378-07:00You've done a great job of telling the story o...You've done a great job of telling the story of Murdoch -- both heroic and tragic.<br /><br />Well done!Louise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-69360067704300140952010-09-20T11:30:46.672-07:002010-09-20T11:30:46.672-07:00@ ALL....A very touching love story but it has dif...@ ALL....A very touching love story but it has different story line for each character be it<br />1)Jack or Rose<br />2)Captain Murdoch<br />3)Cal Hockley (Rose' fiance)<br />4)Captain SmithUma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-16089109835228510492010-09-20T07:06:14.739-07:002010-09-20T07:06:14.739-07:00vivid portray of the titanic experience,
I feel it...vivid portray of the titanic experience,<br />I feel it,<br />what a tense write.<br />beautifully done!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-23086205579554811492010-09-20T07:00:07.757-07:002010-09-20T07:00:07.757-07:00i loved murdoch's character. it was a truly a ...i loved murdoch's character. it was a truly a tragic ending for him but he was one of those who stayed in your mind long after the movie was finished. this was a nice story you've written. :)Bing Yaphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01562123246667338670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-69036221296335054002010-08-13T09:29:34.329-07:002010-08-13T09:29:34.329-07:00really gud! Its taking time to read it fully -:) ...really gud! Its taking time to read it fully <br>-:) <br><br>SuperDevasenahttp://mirra-macherie.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2374770906922548577.post-21171575629373508512010-08-14T23:00:39.032-07:002010-08-14T23:00:39.032-07:00yes but its a story...though long it contains most...yes but its a story...though long it contains most of the details what you saw in the orginal Titanic movieumavidulanoreply@blogger.com