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Wednesday 22 May 2013

Haiku - Betrayal



Water to quench thirst
Look! Mirage in the desert
Betrayal of Eyes 


-written in response to Haiku Heights

8 comments:

  1. Nicely done! I like the use of mirage in your take.

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  2. That was good one, nature's betrayal, mirage in the desert

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  3. A nice take on the prompt!! A mirage can wreck a thirsty man much betrayed!!

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  4. Eyes are misleading sometimes!
    Lovely Haiku!

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  5. how lovely and true can be said for life also.... when we often hallucinate a happy end...

    Richa

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  6. This one is classy ... loved it !!

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