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Darkness, left alone
woman in black prayed
to embrace phoenix
Invisible light
that shone over the darkness
had raced from her heart
She , a strong woman
allowed herself to embrace
into divine light
Haiku - Phoenix
woman in black prayed
to embrace phoenix
Invisible light
that shone over the darkness
had raced from her heart
She , a strong woman
allowed herself to embrace
into divine light
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15 Responses to “Haiku - Phoenix”
Sunday, September 25, 2011
bless for her.
love it.
Sunday, September 25, 2011
Love the strength portrayed here...
Sunday, September 25, 2011
love the thought of embracing into divine light
Sunday, September 25, 2011
i have enjoyed reading the posts from this week's magpie... it is good to read of a strong woman in the divine light overcoming darkness..
Sunday, September 25, 2011
I really like that ending, dear. :-)
Sunday, September 25, 2011
Beautiful! Love love love the ending!
Sunday, September 25, 2011
You've said so much, in so few words. Well done.
Kay, Alberta, Canada
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Sunday, September 25, 2011
Vary beautifully thought out.. a powerful haiku..like phoenix..
Monday, September 26, 2011
nice...particularly like the last stanza...
Monday, September 26, 2011
Phew, love the bit about divine light!
Monday, September 26, 2011
Wonderful take on the HH prompt and the photo. Uplifting and encouraging verses here.
Monday, September 26, 2011
Gorgeous!
Tuesday, September 27, 2011
Hadn't noticed there was divine light in this image to write about till I read this. Thanks :-D
Wednesday, September 28, 2011
power to her
Wednesday, January 11, 2012
beautifully written!!!
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