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The plectrum, 1990's song
pulls the strings
on the wall of my heart, creating
Nostalgic ambiance
Raindrops falling on ground
triggers
smell of sand, flakes of
Tranced memories
Old photo album,dusted
flash backwards
a sound of sigh, longing for
Precious days
Childhood days, turning back
Covets life
Problems unaware
Innocence everywhere
Collection of memories
pleasant ones
storing safely ,deep in mind
Enlivens Heart
Rhyming - Know More
Submitted:Poetry potluck
16 comments:
Thanks for sharing!
Very sweet poem.
precious collections makes a happy heart... :)
Some memories do liven our lives! Enjoy the rally, congrats on the book!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/03/27/delirium-2/
collections of the past,
full of lust
or dust...
fun take...
A++
Very nice.
Lovely.. of what this theme is all about..
@all thanks for commenting!
@Jingle - there is no lust here ,they may be dusted past memories...hope you made a typo :P.
@krislen - the theme 'C ' for A to Z challenge which is running big on April in blogging ..the link is given here ..do check
good one uma and thanks for coming by.. my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/01/21/remain/
Lovely Collections !
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A lovely little slice of life piece here...it is a wonder, the sights and the sounds that can stir the countless memories in our mind. A picture can bring forth so many lovely things, lost to the passage of innocence. I'm not sure how someone got lust out of this...I see a sweet nostalgia, a tender breath of reflection.
so much to take me back...songs often do that...to an earlier much simpler time...nice write...
Well described indeed! I like the collection:)
wonderful poem...thanks for sharing...pete
Music sings to our hearts and our memories.
Nice piece!
lovely collection of memories...memories definitely can have a way of making the heart sing.
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