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Saturday, 5 March 2011

Haiku of a Life



Cold, she has become
Carves for ' Love flames' to swipe through
To heal brutal scars 


by Artifolio

13 comments:

  1. This sounds like a vicious kind of pain, wounding deeply!

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  2. Very intriguing. It begs for more to be told.

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  3. Love and its burning sensation and its leftovers... magic-drawn portrait.

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  4. It happens.. time heals..when mind helps it.. you have put it accross beautifully..

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  5. a haiku that leaves something more to be asked.. wonder what's ahead. lovely take! :)

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  6. strong imagery, impressing!

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  7. it wishes to be written.
    to get another from.
    to sustain or live, alone.

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  8. @all - thanks , hmm...so you all want to know more about it.well,you will.

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  9. What an emotional haiku. Nicely written.

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  10. Well done but I agree that I am intrigued so much I don't want it to end

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