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Life is full of pitfalls and thorns
Halfway through we find ourselves torn
The holes deeper
The thorns bulging thicker
Face it !
Believe to face it
Live it !
Hope to live through it
Each lesson you learn on the way
Moulds you to an archetype one day
Proud and Precious
Standing long
Head up and Strong
-For picture prompt from Magpie
16 comments:
Lovely..
I am still learning to be strong.. :)
stay strong,
get along...
hope that your life is a beautiful song..
Thanks for the inspirations.
Thanks all!When I saw this prompt,I saw the big holes and bulging stone..and still its a beautiful work of art.All I did was,I compared it with Life and this poem was born.
What perfect timing. I was having a difficult morning, and then I read this. Wonderfully inspirational!
I'm a great believer in learning by experience... learning by doing. You said it all in your poem. :)
Very nice...really enjoyed the read...bkm
And I'm so glad the birth was successful.
Oh....nice!!! Very positive and full of some amazing grit! I like it !!
It's a beautiful poem Uma for the Magpie.
Keep at it.
Happy New Year
Shail
Beauty, strength, determination explored in simple tender phrases. Well done.
I agree! Very nicely interpreted from the prompt.
Inspiring piece!
Encouraging things to come. The music startled me. Then i enjoyed it.
'Face it...Live it' good advice!
I appreciate the optimism of your words! :)
Good breath-drawing reminder work. :)
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