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Crushed and Confused
The Secret of Life
Life is full of pitfalls and thorns
Halfway through we find ourselves torn
The holes deeper
The thorns bulging thicker
Face it !
Believe to face it
Live it !
Hope to live through it
Each lesson you learn on the way
Moulds you to an archetype one day
Proud and Precious
Standing long
Head up and Strong
-For picture prompt from Magpie
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16 Responses to “The Secret of Life”
Wednesday, January 05, 2011
Lovely..
I am still learning to be strong.. :)
Wednesday, January 05, 2011
stay strong,
get along...
hope that your life is a beautiful song..
Thanks for the inspirations.
Wednesday, January 05, 2011
Thanks all!When I saw this prompt,I saw the big holes and bulging stone..and still its a beautiful work of art.All I did was,I compared it with Life and this poem was born.
Wednesday, January 05, 2011
What perfect timing. I was having a difficult morning, and then I read this. Wonderfully inspirational!
Wednesday, January 05, 2011
I'm a great believer in learning by experience... learning by doing. You said it all in your poem. :)
Wednesday, January 05, 2011
Very nice...really enjoyed the read...bkm
Wednesday, January 05, 2011
And I'm so glad the birth was successful.
Wednesday, January 05, 2011
Oh....nice!!! Very positive and full of some amazing grit! I like it !!
Wednesday, January 05, 2011
It's a beautiful poem Uma for the Magpie.
Keep at it.
Happy New Year
Shail
Thursday, January 06, 2011
Beauty, strength, determination explored in simple tender phrases. Well done.
Thursday, January 06, 2011
I agree! Very nicely interpreted from the prompt.
Thursday, January 06, 2011
Inspiring piece!
Thursday, January 06, 2011
Encouraging things to come. The music startled me. Then i enjoyed it.
Friday, January 07, 2011
'Face it...Live it' good advice!
Saturday, January 08, 2011
I appreciate the optimism of your words! :)
Tuesday, January 11, 2011
Good breath-drawing reminder work. :)
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