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Wednesday 5 January 2011

The Secret of Life

Life is full of  pitfalls and thorns
Halfway through we find ourselves torn
Crushed and Confused
The holes deeper
The thorns bulging thicker 

Face it !
Believe to face it
Live it !
Hope to live through it

Each lesson you learn on the way
Moulds you to an archetype one day
Proud and Precious
Standing long
Head up and Strong


-For picture prompt from Magpie

16 comments:

  1. Lovely..
    I am still learning to be strong.. :)

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  2. stay strong,
    get along...


    hope that your life is a beautiful song..
    Thanks for the inspirations.

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  3. Thanks all!When I saw this prompt,I saw the big holes and bulging stone..and still its a beautiful work of art.All I did was,I compared it with Life and this poem was born.

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  4. What perfect timing. I was having a difficult morning, and then I read this. Wonderfully inspirational!

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  5. I'm a great believer in learning by experience... learning by doing. You said it all in your poem. :)

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  6. Very nice...really enjoyed the read...bkm

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  7. And I'm so glad the birth was successful.

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  8. Oh....nice!!! Very positive and full of some amazing grit! I like it !!

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  9. It's a beautiful poem Uma for the Magpie.

    Keep at it.
    Happy New Year
    Shail

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  10. Beauty, strength, determination explored in simple tender phrases. Well done.

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  11. I agree! Very nicely interpreted from the prompt.

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  12. Encouraging things to come. The music startled me. Then i enjoyed it.

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  13. 'Face it...Live it' good advice!

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  14. I appreciate the optimism of your words! :)

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  15. Good breath-drawing reminder work. :)

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