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Wednesday, 12 January 2011

The Rain -The Shelter

REALITY OF THE RAIN :


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I was walking back from school
Enjoying the weather moist and cool
I was covered fully from head to toe
Holding my little one and walking slow
Yelp! she cried ,"Mommy,its raining"
Though it was a harmless rain falling
To prevent ourselves from any disaster
We had to run fast for our Shelter


SPIRITUALITY OF THE RAIN


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30 comments:

  1. Uma, both pieces are delightful.
    Rain has such a cleansing effect.
    Pamela

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  2. Love the flow of this and the description of the rain.

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  3. Cool concept to combine home and outside and use the image. Enjoyed, especially the second stanza on the image.

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  4. Dear Uma,
    Good Morning!
    What a splash,dear!
    Beautiful picture and lovely words!
    I love pitter patter raindrops
    Falling through the leaves
    And on my tiled roof...
    Wishing you a wonderful day ahead,
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  5. interesting use of the prompt words and I like what you've done with them.

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  6. Very nice site, actually is my pleasure add it on my favorite ones. Great job, dear friend. Carlos from Brazil was here.

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  7. @ all-lovely that you enjoyed reading my poems and thanks for the comments

    @self-taught -I am happy to be a part of your blog that is created for a cause.Thanks for your visit!

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  8. yeah, keep running and find your shelter.

    lovely rain poem.
    Thanks for sharing.

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  9. Your words and music match the beauty of rain.

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  10. loved the different takes on rain...
    Nothing can beat the feel of first rain...
    beautiful writes

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  11. lovely.. thank you for sharing. congrats on your perfect poet award wk 36.. here’s mine for this thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/19/the-tears/

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  12. Loved both pieces. Nice depth within the verses of the latter piece. Well done/.

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  13. Aahh... loved the soothing nature of these poems...
    Very recently, I experienced similar sensations flooding my mind while I was walking as it was snowing.. it was simply amazing... the little flakes landing on me, and melting to my warmth.. a very lovely feeling indeed! And that's when I got all nostalgic about the Mumbai rains.. :)

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  14. aawwww...that was sooo sweettt :D
    lovely poem :D
    here from Jingle's Rally.. You can find my poem at
    http://megzone.wordpress.com/2011/01/12/i-dance/

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  15. Such a beautiful representation of rain. I like the spiritual connection.

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  16. A melody of rain ... lovely poem:)

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  17. What a beautiful medley of rain poems! Thanks for sharing. :)

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  18. enjoyed reading the compilation of styles...very nice. Thank you for sharing.

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  19. Spell binding.. both the pieces are enchanting..
    I love rains besides enjoying winters- but not so much the puddles.. :(

    Love xxx

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  20. beautiful rainy poems..
    loved them...
    :)

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  21. Very nice page, loved your creative work!

    Short Poems

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  22. Cold rain evokes feelings of security in the sheltered. Yes, I found meaning in all these delightful little poems, even the image of running to protect you and your infant from 'imagined' disasters!

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  23. Both of these are very nice - it's always funny how our first response is to get out of the rain and yet we shower and swim. hmmm. Like your style.

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  24. These are quiet lovely; though the second one stole my heart!

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  25. I enjoyed both of these. Very nice, Honey.

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