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HAIKU FIRST
He asks for her hand
She responds with a soft touch
Love is a promise
STORY OF TWO GLOVES
Once upon a time there was a male glove standing dejected
he was lost and deprived because his other half was missing now
he searched and searched and waited and waited
but never finding the other pair, he walked on the pavement slow
He waked past the garments shop trying to find someone as his companion
he found lots of beautiful gloves,back and white,but none to his need
he was dejected and was moving with absolute abjection
while suddenly to his amazement,he saw a dark brown female glove bleed
He asked her what happened ...all she said was that she was torn apart
and was thrown down here and her master has got another
he felt happy....but selfish in his thoughts, he knew his thinkings are not smart
but all that he knew now is that he has fallen in love with her
He told her ,"I am lost too ...until I met you ,do you like to take my hand"
to his surprise,she laid her hand on his and "yes" she did mutter
and the story concludes as it always happens in all fairyland
they both drained in love,finally married and lived happily ever after
-written for the picture prompt from MAGPIE
Love - A Haiku and A Story
HAIKU FIRST
He asks for her hand
She responds with a soft touch
Love is a promise
STORY OF TWO GLOVES
he was lost and deprived because his other half was missing now
he searched and searched and waited and waited
but never finding the other pair, he walked on the pavement slow
He waked past the garments shop trying to find someone as his companion
he found lots of beautiful gloves,back and white,but none to his need
he was dejected and was moving with absolute abjection
while suddenly to his amazement,he saw a dark brown female glove bleed
He asked her what happened ...all she said was that she was torn apart
and was thrown down here and her master has got another
he felt happy....but selfish in his thoughts, he knew his thinkings are not smart
but all that he knew now is that he has fallen in love with her
He told her ,"I am lost too ...until I met you ,do you like to take my hand"
to his surprise,she laid her hand on his and "yes" she did mutter
and the story concludes as it always happens in all fairyland
they both drained in love,finally married and lived happily ever after
-written for the picture prompt from MAGPIE
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13 Responses to “Love - A Haiku and A Story”
Thursday, December 30, 2010
good attempt.
Thursday, December 30, 2010
awww thats such a sweet story of two gloves :D
Thursday, December 30, 2010
Sweet take on the Magpie gloves....
Thursday, December 30, 2010
Sweet. It's great they could find love for each other despite their differences.
Friday, December 31, 2010
I love a story with a happy ending :) Nice Magpie.
Friday, December 31, 2010
Beautiful tale!
Friday, December 31, 2010
Nice haiku..
and such a cute story...
Love it :)
Saturday, January 01, 2011
I met a glove like that once. We've been married for twenty years now.
Great post
Saturday, January 01, 2011
@all thank you
@timkeen40-lovely.Enjoy the days coming by :)
Saturday, January 01, 2011
Asking and Responding... Love is a promise. Really great Haiku - something I need to work on - less words are sometimes the best! LOL
Sunday, January 02, 2011
love happy endings.
well done.
Monday, January 03, 2011
the story is cute...i really like the haiku though...
Friday, January 07, 2011
:)
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